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A Silent Prayer

Dark, punishing days lie ahead.
       Winter has crept up once again and I'm deep 
      in sad contemplation, saying a silent prayer 
    for the downtrodden without the creature comforts 
         I often take for granted, imagining how 
              they're muddling through life.

       Each time the furious rage of winter roars 
        belligerently, wreaking miserable havoc, 
         and it's chill on my skin is immediate 
      and unforgiving; I think of those occupying 
            ramshackle dwellings with no heat 
         to keep warm, and say a silent prayer.

      Especially on my mind, all the homeless folks
   I've given money to while stopped at a traffic light. 
        "You've made my day, sir. God bless you!," 
            I remember one once saying to me.
     Where is this man now? Somewhere warm and safe?
       Please, God, hear my silent prayer for him!

                     The mere thought of one,  
 just one stray animal, fending for itself out in the cold
       is depressing enough to make me misty-eyed.  
     Why is life during winter so appallingly savage? 
 It's too harsh an element for such a poor creature. I say 
 a silent prayer for God's mercy. It's really all I can do.



Submitted for...
Your 2021 N-A Choice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: William Kekaula
Date: 04/25/2021

N/A in All Yours Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date: 01/20/2021

Date posted: 01/17/2021
Date originally written: 07/23/2007
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roper Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 8:48 PM
Great write, Edward, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:02 PM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
Mcintosh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Congrats. God bless you. Love, Gina
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 2:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gina:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Prayer is the line to God. Have a blessed day writing away..............
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Thank you for the wonderful visit and comments, Paula:-)
Alex Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 6:51 AM
Thank you, Chisturaj!:-) Stay blessed.
Agustin Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... very soothing to the soul. God bless you.
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Thank you so much for the awesome feedback, Beata:-) God bless...
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 10:53 PM
Heartfelt words that echo our byways, Edward, truly a compassionate write, my gratitude for your participation and compliments for your win, Aloha!
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 3:04 AM
Thank you very much for my placement and wonderful comments, William:-)
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 1:20 AM
Your prayers are needed for the unfortunate and animals and all God's creatures, gut-wrenching
Ibeh Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 5:03 PM
I'm glad this one resonated with you, Barbara:-)
Seeker Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:20 PM
Beautiful prayer, indeed!
Ibeh Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 3:08 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
Pandit Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Awesome sentiments in this silent prayer. I'm touched by your verses for the less fortunate and the animals. Glad you could re-create some of what you lost. I truly enjoyed those themes you used in your contests.
Ibeh Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 11:09 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful comments, Vijay:-) I'm glad you enjoyed the "Pick-A-Title" contest series.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 7:18 AM
A beautiful verse and silent prayer from you kind heart - a expression so sweet and gentle it sooths and impresses me as inspiring hearts and souls. Beautiful and wise and caring - a kindness too great to forget..saving to my faves. God bless you dear friend
Ibeh Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Wow, thank you for faving this old poem---a "winter poem" not written in winter! go figure, lol---of mine, Regina!:-) Blessings, my friend.
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