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Dark, punishing days lie ahead. Winter has crept up once again and I'm deep in sad contemplation, saying a silent prayer for the downtrodden without the creature comforts I often take for granted, imagining how they're muddling through life. Each time the furious rage of winter roars belligerently, wreaking miserable havoc, and it's chill on my skin is immediate and unforgiving; I think of those occupying ramshackle dwellings with no heat to keep warm, and say a silent prayer. Especially on my mind, all the homeless folks I've given money to while stopped at a traffic light. "You've made my day, sir. God bless you!," I remember one once saying to me. Where is this man now? Somewhere warm and safe? Please, God, hear my silent prayer for him! The mere thought of one, just one stray animal, fending for itself out in the cold is depressing enough to make me misty-eyed. Why is life during winter so appallingly savage? It's too harsh an element for such a poor creature. I say a silent prayer for God's mercy. It's really all I can do. Submitted for... Your 2021 N-A Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula Date: 04/25/2021 N/A in All Yours Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 01/20/2021 Date posted: 01/17/2021 Date originally written: 07/23/2007

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Date: 4/28/2021 8:48:00 PM
Great write, Edward, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/28/2021 9:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
Date: 4/28/2021 11:53:00 AM
Congrats. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/28/2021 2:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gina:-)
Date: 4/28/2021 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Prayer is the line to God. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/28/2021 2:01:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful visit and comments, Paula:-)
Date: 4/28/2021 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/28/2021 6:51:00 AM
Thank you, Chisturaj!:-) Stay blessed.
Date: 4/28/2021 4:23:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... very soothing to the soul. God bless you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/28/2021 6:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for the awesome feedback, Beata:-) God bless...
Date: 4/27/2021 10:53:00 PM
Heartfelt words that echo our byways, Edward, truly a compassionate write, my gratitude for your participation and compliments for your win, Aloha!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/28/2021 3:04:00 AM
Thank you very much for my placement and wonderful comments, William:-)
Date: 2/2/2021 1:20:00 AM
Your prayers are needed for the unfortunate and animals and all God's creatures, gut-wrenching
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/2/2021 5:03:00 PM
I'm glad this one resonated with you, Barbara:-)
Date: 1/17/2021 6:20:00 PM
Beautiful prayer, indeed!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/18/2021 3:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
Date: 1/17/2021 10:00:00 AM
Awesome sentiments in this silent prayer. I'm touched by your verses for the less fortunate and the animals. Glad you could re-create some of what you lost. I truly enjoyed those themes you used in your contests.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2021 11:09:00 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful comments, Vijay:-) I'm glad you enjoyed the "Pick-A-Title" contest series.
Date: 1/17/2021 7:18:00 AM
A beautiful verse and silent prayer from you kind heart - a expression so sweet and gentle it sooths and impresses me as inspiring hearts and souls. Beautiful and wise and caring - a kindness too great to forget..saving to my faves. God bless you dear friend
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2021 7:21:00 AM
Wow, thank you for faving this old poem---a "winter poem" not written in winter! go figure, lol---of mine, Regina!:-) Blessings, my friend.

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