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A Silent Night

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He touches me in the early dawn Hours before the chickens start to Peck the rich, toasted earth around Their pen, clucking with enthusiasm For the tassels of rich emerald lawn Coming away with them as they peck Relentlessly with a fervor that dances Merrily to the tune of cackling, fussing Peppered with crows from the rooster’s Fertility gloating, he swaggers, preening Sensing the way his heart will mourn On the days the hen sits on her almond Shaped eggs, awaiting the time when There will be new life tapping its way Through the tough shells to be trained By the hen to feed, bath and seek Refuge, as I chase out the lines Of his hands against my breast in the Morning, while we embrace, caressing Sighing, whispering, just before the light Shines down from the sky to warm my Thighs and trace a glimmer of hope Along the edge of the silent night
August 20, 2020

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Date: 10/3/2020 3:58:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem, it's lovely the hen got to keep her eggs and sit in wait for her little chicks. Congratulations on your win. X
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Date: 10/3/2020 3:23:00 PM
Entertains artistically with striking symbolisms, Regina, admittedly, rereads shone a delightful added light, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 8/19/2020 1:35:00 PM
I was going to say I thought you wrote this about me, but then I read it all and thought not lol... This is a sensual poem, but I wonder if it's about two people or is it about sunset or sunrise
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Silent One
Date: 8/20/2020 12:42:00 AM
That's what I thought also lol..
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/19/2020 2:37:00 PM
Hi... It's about two people who live on a farm with chickens :) LOL
Date: 8/19/2020 12:58:00 PM
Hello Regina McIntosh, this is a passionate poem. Hope is our bright light to gives us strength. Enjoy your day my friend.
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