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A Silent Good-Bye

A Silent Good-bye She didn’t see it slipping away did not feel time’s erasers slowly clearing the board was not aware of her shrinking world. It took longer to find things like words and faces memories and laughter her cigarettes. She did not feel the cold numbing her thoughts a lifetime fading to black. She had seen them leave once 10 children off to school, to marriage, too soon, too far. Now she watched them leaving again, fading, slipping away forever. 2/11/2018 submitted to – Loss of an Innocent Mind – Poetry Contest sponsor – Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 4/9/2018 4:03:00 PM
Very touching, John. Lovely. Congrats on a wonderful winner of a poem.
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Date: 2/28/2018 2:49:00 AM
Very well expressed. Clear and subtle at the same time. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/21/2018 10:56:00 PM
Awesome write, John, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 2/21/2018 1:01:00 PM
Wow.. such a poignant portrayal John. Sadly emotional especially your second and third stanzas. Delicately and beautifully expressed.. Congratulations on your excellent win with this heartbreaking poem. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/12/2018 8:37:00 AM
Heartbreakingly sad! A brilliant write John. ~ Judy
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Date: 2/11/2018 9:49:00 AM
Brilliant verse John, Sometimes you feel someone has pressed fast forward on your life ,you watch your family and others growing not realising you're growing too.Good luck in the contest. Regards Tom
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:43:00 AM
True words of life...Nice poem...All the best John
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