A Sign From God

Send for me, should I be gone- I am but a touch away In hand with God and we are One (In folds of light my Mind doth lay) My shining Soul, both bright and dark, Was bound by birth to Misery With lucid lines, I now embark To write my Life through Poetry *God Bursts Everywhere Contest Entry* ~JustThatArchaicPoet aka Chan

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2014 7:54:00 PM

way to go!!! finally get to see your entry. gotta get to hubbie's dinner now. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/8/2014 1:35:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and congratulations on fine win. All the best for the year 2014 ,Chan

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 1/8/2014 7:38:00 AM

Thanks so much, Doc :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/17/2013 8:01:00 AM

We are all born in sin but made for eternity. We are visitors in this World but citizens of another. I'm glad you are placing your hand in God's he will gladly lead you on his path.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/17/2013 8:25:00 AM

Good morning, Richard. I hope my views concerning God do not come across as "agnostic" or, even worse, atheistic, because I have an iron-clad faith in Him, though my spiritual beliefs usually radically differ from the "norm". I would not be typing right now but for Him. Thanks for the review! :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 11:11:00 PM

This embodies pain as if it is still a currently existing form in your life. Your confessional poem I thought was good, though it exudes with forlorn emotions it is indeed something that I can succinctly relate to. Brilliant!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/16/2013 8:51:00 AM

Thanks for the insightful review, Mustapha; I appreciate it :)