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A Sight To See

Dots of pink decorate the green Swaying in this bright, blooming scene Pink rose buds, pure simplicity Born in new multiplicity Heidi Sands 6/8/18 Placed 2nd in the... When a fourth line helps it rhyme contest.

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Date: 6/14/2018 8:54:00 PM
Wonderful write,Heidi !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2018 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Eve! :)
Date: 6/13/2018 2:13:00 PM
Lovely imagery in pink, Heidi! Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Paul! :)
Date: 6/13/2018 10:21:00 AM
Well, congrats on your win in the contest, Heidi---although it seems that any poem that's so 'Dickinsonesque' should be a first-prize trophy winner...You still have my first prize!! Best always, Gerson
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. That is kind of you to say! :)
Date: 6/13/2018 10:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 6/13/2018 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Heidi, just four lines and you have painted a beautiful picture with your words, well written. :))
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Roy! :)
Date: 6/13/2018 8:52:00 AM
Congrats Heidi :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Gary :)
Date: 6/13/2018 7:50:00 AM
Congrats :) :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Natasha :)
Date: 6/13/2018 7:36:00 AM
Congrats for your imaginative and well written piece. Faux
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Faux :)
Date: 6/13/2018 7:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your little rhyme poem, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 6/13/2018 7:15:00 AM
Lovely imagery Heidi and a lovely sight to see... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you SO. I appreciate the placement and I am happy you loved the imagery :)
Date: 6/13/2018 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Tom! I appreciate your support always :)
Date: 6/12/2018 11:12:00 AM
Excellence in elegance and eloquence. Emily Dickenesque, methinks. It's a FAVE of mine! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2018 2:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon! I am happy to hear you like this one :)
Date: 6/9/2018 9:32:00 AM
I love it. Mo down, SO to go ;) xo!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/9/2018 11:19:00 AM
Yay! Happy you love it Maureen! Thank you :)
Date: 6/8/2018 12:40:00 PM
Imagery, color and birth...new life in your poem...All the best Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/8/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Arturo :)

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