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A Sigh of Relief

A rogue wave and hurricane winds tossed our vessel and broke her back. And night holds us in its embrace as cerulean seas turn black. We have no compass or rudder, but luckily spot a lagoon. And with the tide assisting us we hope to drift there come full moon. The breakers are merely ripples, indicating there is no reef. And as currents take us to shore we all share a sigh of relief. The small island appears brooding, smelling like someone's cooking meat. For cannibals inhabit it, and greet us as something to eat. (Quatrain) 7/7/2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/17/2015 6:21:00 PM

A 7, Emile, a very superb write. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/18/2015 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 10:11:00 PM

A worthy unmber one, Emile, well done. Regards, Viv

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/18/2015 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Viv, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 10:11:00 PM

anumber one. Must learn to type. Well done again. Regards, Viv

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2015 9:51:00 AM

Thanks Viv, you've brought a smile to my day. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 1:38:00 AM

Hi Emile, Congratulations --Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/15/2015 8:02:00 AM

Thanks Linda, I appreciate all the support you have given me. Emile.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/14/2015 1:51:00 AM

Hi Emile, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your big win:-)Alexis

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/14/2015 10:37:00 AM

Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2015 12:03:00 AM

Emile, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/14/2015 10:39:00 AM

As always SKAT, I appreciate all the support you have given me. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/13/2015 12:00:00 PM

I loved this one Emile congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/14/2015 10:40:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/13/2015 11:54:00 AM

I knew this would place high Emile. Number one! Big congrats on your win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/14/2015 10:41:00 AM

Thanks Connie, I appreciate your friendly words of encouragement and support. Emile.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/13/2015 8:36:00 AM

This was perfect, you told a complete story with a twist at the end. I enjoyed this so much! You deserve the first place win, congrats!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/13/2015 9:24:00 AM

Thanks so much Casarah, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/10/2015 10:58:00 AM

Emile, this an action pack scene delivered by you in soft way.. but still you manage to let me feel the thrill!!!~Olive Eloisa

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/10/2015 3:19:00 PM

Thanks so much Olive, as always I appreciate all your support. Emile.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/8/2015 11:44:00 AM

Oooo...this one's rather chilling. When adventuring, a sigh of relief can merely be the brink of the next gasp of surprise. I absolutely love it! Always, Laura

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/9/2015 8:58:00 AM

Thanks again Laura, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.