A Sigh of Relief

A rogue wave and hurricane winds tossed our vessel and broke her back. And night holds us in its embrace as cerulean seas turn black. We have no compass or rudder, but luckily spot a lagoon. And with the tide assisting us we hope to drift there come full moon. The breakers are merely ripples, indicating there is no reef. And as currents take us to shore we all share a sigh of relief. The small island appears brooding, smelling like someone's cooking meat. For cannibals inhabit it, and greet us as something to eat. (Quatrain) 7/7/2015
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Date: 7/17/2015 6:21:00 PM
A 7, Emile, a very superb write. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/18/2015 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 7/15/2015 10:11:00 PM
A worthy unmber one, Emile, well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/18/2015 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 7/15/2015 10:11:00 PM
anumber one. Must learn to type. Well done again. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/16/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Viv, you've brought a smile to my day. Emile.
Date: 7/15/2015 1:38:00 AM
Hi Emile, Congratulations --Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/15/2015 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate all the support you have given me. Emile.
Date: 7/14/2015 1:51:00 AM
Hi Emile, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your big win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/14/2015 10:37:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/14/2015 12:03:00 AM
Emile, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/14/2015 10:39:00 AM
As always SKAT, I appreciate all the support you have given me. Emile.
Date: 7/13/2015 12:00:00 PM
I loved this one Emile congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/14/2015 10:40:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 7/13/2015 11:54:00 AM
I knew this would place high Emile. Number one! Big congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/14/2015 10:41:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your friendly words of encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 7/13/2015 8:36:00 AM
This was perfect, you told a complete story with a twist at the end. I enjoyed this so much! You deserve the first place win, congrats!
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Date: 7/13/2015 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Casarah, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/10/2015 10:58:00 AM
Emile, this an action pack scene delivered by you in soft way.. but still you manage to let me feel the thrill!!!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/10/2015 3:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Olive, as always I appreciate all your support. Emile.
Date: 7/8/2015 11:44:00 AM
Oooo...this one's rather chilling. When adventuring, a sigh of relief can merely be the brink of the next gasp of surprise. I absolutely love it! Always, Laura
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Date: 7/9/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks again Laura, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Date: 7/8/2015 11:15:00 AM
Emile, oh so wonderful, an awesome 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, spirit awareness
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Date: 7/9/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Broken, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 7/8/2015 8:25:00 AM
A poetic suspense thriller laced with dark humor! Loved this Emile! Man, you have style! 7...:-)))
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Date: 7/9/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your kind words of encouragement. Emile.
Date: 7/8/2015 2:13:00 AM
This is so great Emile! I had a really good laugh over it. I am sure this one will be high on the winner's list! Superb wording through out. 7
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Date: 7/8/2015 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 7/7/2015 4:04:00 PM
very creative - love the twist at the end - good luck in the contest:-)Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 7/7/2015 3:39:00 PM
Very creative, excellent write! I give it a 7 EASY!
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:03:00 PM
Thanks Anna, your comments are most welcome. Emile.
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