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A Shy Teenager

a shy teenager coaxed to try on pink lipstick~ breaks into a smile Submitted on May 31, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 5, MAY 2019 SENRYU sponsored by DEAR HEART - RANKED 3RD

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2019 3:57:00 PM

I remember this sweet one. congrats, Line.

Constance La France

Date: 6/10/2019 12:28:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/10/2019 1:05:00 PM

Thank you, Constance. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2019 3:49:00 PM

a lovely image. I recall my pink frost lipstick of jr high. I loved it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/1/2019 7:32:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/31/2019 11:36:00 PM

And that smile lighted up the room!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/1/2019 3:49:00 AM

For sure. Thanks, Timothy.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/31/2019 4:34:00 PM

Sounds a little like me during my teenage years-

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/31/2019 4:43:00 PM

Really cute, I'm sure.