A Shroud of White

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crystals in the air gently fall as a blanket shroud of fallen snow

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/9/2018 3:13:00 PM

Lovely wintry imagery, Lin...something which I will never witness in Malta!! We don't have any snow fairies here:) Regards // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 2/9/2018 9:38:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. First snow is beautiful

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/2/2018 8:37:00 AM

Winter must be boring after a time, Isn't it, without all the colours of life?? nice one, Lin:)

Lin Lane
Date: 2/2/2018 8:47:00 AM

Born and raised in the South, I'd only seen snow a couple of times in my life until I spent 4 years in Colorado, but it was such a beautiful treat for me that I never tired of it until it became salted slush. Thanks, Jo.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/24/2018 4:22:00 PM

very lovely, lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 2/2/2018 8:45:00 AM

Merci, Ilene.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/24/2018 11:59:00 AM

- A wonderful winter pic., Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 2/2/2018 8:45:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise

Jan Allison

Date: 1/24/2018 8:47:00 AM

fabulous descriptive haiku Lin... it certainly was a shroud in 2013 when so many livestock perished here:-( hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/24/2018 8:49:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Jan. Though it's a beautiful pastoral picture, I got a chill just looking at it.