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A Shot In the Park

a hop skip and a lump in the throat ~ first kiss 12.27.2019

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Peter Onyancha

Date: 2/8/2020 10:54:00 AM

Ha ha ha. Let me laugh, frown, cry, and gasp

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/6/2020 11:52:00 PM

Late on congrats, Mo! This is grrrreat! PR

Jack Ellison

Date: 12/31/2019 4:54:00 PM

First kiss is the bestest! Love, HJ XOX

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 12/30/2019 6:02:00 PM

Wonderful!

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 12/30/2019 4:26:00 PM

Or a glance at a dance led to first romance. Ah! Sweet memories. Thank you for the touching reminder, Maureen

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/28/2019 10:46:00 PM

Good one, Maureen. Janice

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/28/2019 12:43:00 PM

That is so 'naively' beautiful ...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/28/2019 9:42:00 AM

Brings back memories. ;0) Happy New Year Maureen.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2019 8:28:00 PM

so sweet, Maureen. Congrats on the win.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/27/2019 5:19:00 PM

So, over time, your first kiss was a winner? Aloha! Rico

Charles Messina

Date: 12/27/2019 5:05:00 PM

Yep, just like that :) Congrats on your win, Mo. xocm

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/27/2019 3:28:00 PM

Sweet, Maureen. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 12/27/2019 3:24:00 PM

That's the way it is, Maureen. Good luck in the contest. // Barry

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2019 2:37:00 PM

Maureen, and the first thing I said and I a shy one, Can you kiss me. and he didn't have to think twice. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/27/2019 11:09:00 AM

Peter Sellers' is laughing in his grave Maureen. What a wonderful line. A captured moment where a j ends up an L. Sweet!!! Thank you.

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2019 10:32:00 AM

my kiss was not like this... i can still remember it... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

John Lawless

Date: 12/27/2019 10:21:00 AM

you didn't swallow your gum again Mo

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/27/2019 8:48:00 AM

Great one Maureen :)

Bobby May

Date: 12/27/2019 8:07:00 AM

Yep, that's the way I remember it, I am an expert now. lol such few words with a lot of thought about what we all experience.