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A Short Vacation On the Prairie

Now the twilight was gone 
As we arrived at little Utah inn.
At the edge of the vast prairie.

We rested well savouring the bliss
Of a quiet night away from the city.

Yet early in the morning we woke
To the sound of hooves pounding 
Of the dust covered bison which ran 
Across the shrubby prairie,
Leaving a large cloud of dust.

Time for breakfast, delicious and tasty.
From our window we could admire
The evergreen red cedars and admired
The tall forest of American Arborvitae. 
But my love was fascinated by
The cultivated Saucer Magnolia.

We decided to hire a guide and leave for a park.
We were sure to see birds  flying.
Colorful and warbling to our delight.
The Reddish Egret caught our fancy
Though the Sapsucker could compete its song.

But now twilight was descending again
So back to a delicious evening fest.
How we’ll rue the time when 
We had to turn back to noisy city unrest.
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Skelly Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 12:27 AM
You took us on a really nice Journey...
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Very romantic vacation, my friend, well written. Blessings
Anaya Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 4:12 PM
It sounds nice Victor. It pays to use a tour guide; much is learned about the surroundings and makes the experience more meaningful. Hugs ~Anaya
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 2:44 PM
Gosh what inspired this poem about the state of Utah? You are so good at many themes and styles
Edmonds  Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:07 PM
Victor I’ve enjoyed reading about your break away from the city. The Saucer Magnolia is a beautiful tree, the blooms so breathtakingly lovely… Belle
Fowler Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:05 PM
The comparison between shrubby prairie and city unrest is fabulous Victor. Very nicely done! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:47 AM
I feel as though I’ve been on vacation reading this lovely write. Looked up the couple trees mentioned…beautiful! Hugs, Victor ~ Kim
Tor Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 9:23 PM
A wonderful expression of getting away to the beauty of the Prarie. Enjoyed reading Victor. Love how you made me feel out there and reminding me how dreadful the city is to return too.
Kendrick Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Ahh!! Delightful vacation or honeymoon. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
Kannan Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 6:30 AM
What a beautiful vacation!!! Could feel the place ... Thanks for taking us along... My fav...
Pandit Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 5:33 AM
Enjoyed the romantic outing you so skillfully convey bringing forth the images for the reader, Victor. An evening to remember and cherish!
M  Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 2:51 AM
Hey brother Victor…..your sister here hehe! I seem to have missed this lovely poem of yours. Sounds like an amazing escape from city life and a wonderful place to be. It always takes me awhile to adjust to being in the city after visiting the country. Enjoyed…..sending a cuddle….Debx
Buehler Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 9:45 PM
Victor, this is a lovely telling of a brief but blissful romantic getaway, from the hubbub of city life. Very much enjoyed! :)
Bayles Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 9:13 PM
What nice verse about an escape from the city. Great detail and emotion.
George Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 8:37 PM
What a beautiful way of spending a day in a quiet cottage in the prairie ! The poem makes the reader also feel so relaxed ! Lovely description of the cedar trees and the birds!
May Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 6:05 PM
Sounds like a nice vacation, Replacining the din of the city with sights and sounds of nature, Wonderful write
Horsman Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 5:02 PM
Love this Victor, Once more you take one there, the very place you write on.
Rose  Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 3:16 PM
sounds like you had one amazing vacation, love it when we make memories that last us a lifetime. You describe it so well, its as if I was there, :)
Poet Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 11:13 AM
Victor, you have written some beautiful poetry here. In addition, the location is lovely, peaceful, and perfect for unwinding after a stressful week.
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 10:37 AM
- A beautiful, quiet and relaxing place to spend a few days ... a lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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