A Short Vacation On the Prairie

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Now the twilight was gone 
As we arrived at little Utah inn.
At the edge of the vast prairie.

We rested well savouring the bliss
Of a quiet night away from the city.

Yet early in the morning we woke
To the sound of hooves pounding 
Of the dust covered bison which ran 
Across the shrubby prairie,
Leaving a large cloud of dust.

Time for breakfast, delicious and tasty.
From our window we could admire
The evergreen red cedars and admired
The tall forest of American Arborvitae. 
But my love was fascinated by
The cultivated Saucer Magnolia.

We decided to hire a guide and leave for a park.
We were sure to see birds  flying.
Colorful and warbling to our delight.
The Reddish Egret caught our fancy
Though the Sapsucker could compete its song.

But now twilight was descending again
So back to a delicious evening fest.
How we’ll rue the time when 
We had to turn back to noisy city unrest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/30/2022 12:27:00 AM
You took us on a really nice Journey...
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Date: 8/28/2022 9:55:00 AM
Very romantic vacation, my friend, well written. Blessings
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Date: 8/27/2022 4:12:00 PM
It sounds nice Victor. It pays to use a tour guide; much is learned about the surroundings and makes the experience more meaningful. Hugs ~Anaya
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Date: 8/27/2022 2:44:00 PM
Gosh what inspired this poem about the state of Utah? You are so good at many themes and styles
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Date: 8/27/2022 12:07:00 PM
Victor I’ve enjoyed reading about your break away from the city. The Saucer Magnolia is a beautiful tree, the blooms so breathtakingly lovely… Belle
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Date: 8/27/2022 12:05:00 PM
The comparison between shrubby prairie and city unrest is fabulous Victor. Very nicely done! Linda
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Date: 8/27/2022 6:47:00 AM
I feel as though I’ve been on vacation reading this lovely write. Looked up the couple trees mentioned…beautiful! Hugs, Victor ~ Kim
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Date: 8/26/2022 9:23:00 PM
A wonderful expression of getting away to the beauty of the Prarie. Enjoyed reading Victor. Love how you made me feel out there and reminding me how dreadful the city is to return too.
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Date: 8/26/2022 12:52:00 PM
Ahh!! Delightful vacation or honeymoon. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
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Date: 8/26/2022 6:30:00 AM
What a beautiful vacation!!! Could feel the place ... Thanks for taking us along... My fav...
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Date: 8/26/2022 5:33:00 AM
Enjoyed the romantic outing you so skillfully convey bringing forth the images for the reader, Victor. An evening to remember and cherish!
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Date: 8/26/2022 2:51:00 AM
Hey brother Victor…..your sister here hehe! I seem to have missed this lovely poem of yours. Sounds like an amazing escape from city life and a wonderful place to be. It always takes me awhile to adjust to being in the city after visiting the country. Enjoyed…..sending a cuddle….Debx
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Date: 8/25/2022 9:45:00 PM
Victor, this is a lovely telling of a brief but blissful romantic getaway, from the hubbub of city life. Very much enjoyed! :)
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Date: 8/25/2022 9:13:00 PM
What nice verse about an escape from the city. Great detail and emotion.
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Date: 8/25/2022 8:37:00 PM
What a beautiful way of spending a day in a quiet cottage in the prairie ! The poem makes the reader also feel so relaxed ! Lovely description of the cedar trees and the birds!
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Date: 8/25/2022 6:05:00 PM
Sounds like a nice vacation, Replacining the din of the city with sights and sounds of nature, Wonderful write
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Date: 8/25/2022 5:02:00 PM
Love this Victor, Once more you take one there, the very place you write on.
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Date: 8/25/2022 3:16:00 PM
sounds like you had one amazing vacation, love it when we make memories that last us a lifetime. You describe it so well, its as if I was there, :)
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Date: 8/25/2022 11:13:00 AM
Victor, you have written some beautiful poetry here. In addition, the location is lovely, peaceful, and perfect for unwinding after a stressful week.
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Date: 8/25/2022 10:37:00 AM
- A beautiful, quiet and relaxing place to spend a few days ... a lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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