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A Shining Forest Princess My Heart Made

A Shining Forest Princess My Heart Made While walking in heaven's forest garden a wanderer within this magic realm. Sought mystical views to grant a pardon resting, found her underneath a witch elm. Deep in my enchantment I found her there sweetest vision passing into my view. She, mythical creature gracing the air as if my longing mind brought her on cue! Needing a partner for her pas de deux she beseeching me to give her my aid. Thus began my forest dancing debut with a beautiful goddess my mind made. Dance over, this vision bid sweet adieu. I wonder, was it a dream or love true? Robert J. Lindley, 10-17-2015 Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 100 Target hit- with a perfect ten syllables per verse and exactly 100 word count!! Not an easy task... --Tyr

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Date: 10/17/2015 9:40:00 PM
Well I guess I have no choice but to rate this a 10 instead of a 7 !!!! Great poem!
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Date: 10/17/2015 4:47:00 PM
Your words dance off the page Robert - a charming poem:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 10/17/2015 3:40:00 PM
Very pretty... I enjoyed reading your note about your target, too. I agree it is not an easy task.
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