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A Shift

I sensed a shift through the earth, above the clouds, beyond the stars. I tried to capture these changes of feeling, of movement, of energy. I tried to tell the universe there was meaning after all— valuable enough to manifest into a thought, an action, a poem. March 16, 2023

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/23/2024 7:36:00 PM

You are very in tune Laura, I like that

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/23/2024 7:46:00 PM

<3 thank you so much! Hope you have been doing well.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/23/2024 6:09:00 PM

Dear Laura, The way you articulate the subtle yet profound changes in the world around us speaks volumes about your sensitivity and insight. Your words effortlessly transport the reader beyond the confines of the ordinary, inviting us to contemplate the mysteries and marvels of existence. The imagery you employ, from the earth to the stars, evokes a sense of interconnectedness and universal significance. It’s as though you’ve tapped into a collective consciousness, translating the ineffable into tangible emotions and thoughts. - Blessings, Daniel

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/23/2024 7:46:00 PM

Thank you Daniel. I loved reading your take on my poem. Really appreciate your thoughts and your visit ~Laura

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/23/2024 5:35:00 PM

Ah good to see you here! Metaphysics! It's amazing to me what our brains lead us to. You can be very perceptive and that is a wonderful thing. Feelings are a great guide and what you are sensing brought you back here, which in and of itself is a wonderful thing. Thank-you so much for alerting me to your presence. In my crazy self-centered and foolish way, I can wish it was a thought I had that you perceived. But alas, I am just a brief little spark in this universe. You are so very wonderful!!