A Severe Thunderstorm

At first, only a few droplets fall from the clouds to quench the heat. And like drips of perspiration: splashes start to freckle the street. What begins as a light sprinkle: morphs into a raging downpour. And water pools at drainage grates, flooded sewers: can take no more. Lightning bolts splinter charcoal skies, as thunderclaps, make the earth quake. And the wind howls like a banshee: garbage cans, toppling in its wake. City roads, with cement sidewalks, cannot function as a blotter. And islands begin to appear: awash in a flood of water. As the receding storm passes, raindrops dwindle to just a few. And when the wind starts to calm down, scattered clouds reveal skies of blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Lovely description, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:52 AM
You paint a wonderful picture with your words Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
George   Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 3:19 PM
You paint a vivid picture with your words with this masterful quatrain, Emile. Elaine
Pinet Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Elaine, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Bocsa Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 11:57 AM
In North in the rainy country, the sun is arises first in the men`soul. Very good depiction of weather and feelings and the special rhythm. Laudable imagery and echoes of flood and kind of melancholy and clouds and hope human mistakes can be cleaned without tragic events. Not the seasons are as they once were.
Pinet Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Ovidiu, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Irwin Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Very Nice. It makes me long for summer, (even more).
Pinet Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Thanks Luke, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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