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A Settled Sweetness

two septets with rhyme At long last, my friend, she bears no shame. She spent a year seeking a soul-mate. His eyes obliged her life to claim, yet he could not, he would not propose. Their calm ship was headed aground for months she kept it together - an ocean of hope, her playground. Fisherman's widow! At long last she reeled in and quit her searching. She found her love had been miscast. Two smiling faces fade from sight, they travel on two different waves. Feeling free, both alone tonight, the settled sweetness of farewell. inspired by a quote from Andrea del Sarto byRobert Browning, "Ah, but a man's reach should exceed his grasp,"

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Date: 4/25/2015 11:44:00 PM
Reason, Congratulations in John Lawless "Just Within Reach" contest. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations, Reason, on your lovely win.
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Date: 4/21/2015 5:58:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Reason, with the calm of acceptance of "just within reach" not materializing. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:42:00 PM
thank you, Sandra, it was purely fictional for me, but sad reality for some in a relationship that lacks commitment. I appreciate your time.
Date: 4/21/2015 2:44:00 PM
Congrad's on your verse winning. Light & Love
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:20:00 AM
"The settled sweetness of farewell" a wonderful way to rephrase the classic "parting is such sweet sorrow". Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 4/21/2015 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, John, I appreciate the placement and the opportunity to write on such an open-ended prompt.
Date: 4/14/2015 9:31:00 PM
Great quote, great poem. An excellent write!
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Date: 4/15/2015 8:27:00 PM
thank you, Maurice. It is the sum of my remembrance of English Lit. Love that poem.

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