A Seasonal Change

Leaves were green dresses in Spring; now wrinkled with age
Yellowed as an old love poem written on a parchment page
Stripped from tree limbs by Autumn's vibrant flowing winds
Chilled air is part of seasonal changes that Nature rescinds

It's sweater weather for long walks on the cool days of Fall 
Southbound birds fly overhead. I hear their migratory call
Into the woods I wandered; dampened by a sprinkle of rain
Remnants of fallen leaves line the paths on shores of Maine

It's time to build a camp fire, as light of day begins to fade
I trek back across a small stream, shallow enough to wade
with treasures of an owl's feather, and a scarlet maple leaf
The last ray of sun casts a golden glow on the woods' motif




September 11, 2020
Autumn-Fall Rhyme Challenge
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Goldsmith Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love this poem and I love fall. A wonderful write. Enjoy you win.................
Logan Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Thanks so much, Paula.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 5:32 AM
Congrats, sweet lady... this is exquisitely done! Prayers and love sent your way. God bless you
Logan Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Thank you for the kind comments!
Watt Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Love the many aspects of fall you mention: the birds, leaves falling, days growing shorter, air getting cooler, and a crisp walk through the woods. Pure loveliness, congrats on your fine win, Jenna ~ John
Logan Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 2:00 AM
Thanks for the many kind compliments you've left for my poetry, John.
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 3:36 PM
Hi Jenna, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 6:27 PM
Thank you very much, Jan.
Kitchin Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 3:12 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your podium placement with your gorgeous Autumn poem, love the Maine reference!
Logan Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 6:26 PM
Hi Tania. I am honored to have received a placement in your contest. Thank you very much.
Laurie Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 5:04 PM
Hello Jenna … easy to picture the scenes in your poem. Yes autumn often delivers a calm and rustic colours before a winter’s dearth - thank you Jenna - Lindsay
Logan Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 5:09 PM
Thank YOU for such kind comments, Lindsay.
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Beautiful verse Jenna, I love the autumn, my favourite season but will have to wait another couple of weeks to see it. Good luck. Tom
Logan Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 5:08 PM
My favorite, too, Tom. Thanks for always supporting my poetry.
Allison Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 7:52 AM
What wonderful autumnal imagery of the trees and I feel all warm and snuggly thinking of the camp fire and thick sweaters. a joy to read:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 5:07 PM
Thank you a lot, Jan. I wanted to be part of the scene.
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