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A Seasonal Change

Leaves were green dresses in Spring; now wrinkled with age Yellowed as an old love poem written on a parchment page Stripped from tree limbs by Autumn's vibrant flowing winds Chilled air is part of seasonal changes that Nature rescinds It's sweater weather for long walks on the cool days of Fall Southbound birds fly overhead. I hear their migratory call Into the woods I wandered; dampened by a sprinkle of rain Remnants of fallen leaves line the paths on shores of Maine It's time to build a camp fire, as light of day begins to fade I trek back across a small stream, shallow enough to wade with treasures of an owl's feather, and a scarlet maple leaf The last ray of sun casts a golden glow on the woods' motif September 11, 2020 Autumn-Fall Rhyme Challenge Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 9/19/2020 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love this poem and I love fall. A wonderful write. Enjoy you win.................
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2020 1:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula.
Date: 9/19/2020 5:32:00 AM
Congrats, sweet lady... this is exquisitely done! Prayers and love sent your way. God bless you
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2020 1:45:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comments!
Date: 9/18/2020 8:18:00 PM
Love the many aspects of fall you mention: the birds, leaves falling, days growing shorter, air getting cooler, and a crisp walk through the woods. Pure loveliness, congrats on your fine win, Jenna ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/19/2020 2:00:00 AM
Thanks for the many kind compliments you've left for my poetry, John.
Date: 9/18/2020 3:36:00 PM
Hi Jenna, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/18/2020 6:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jan.
Date: 9/18/2020 3:12:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your podium placement with your gorgeous Autumn poem, love the Maine reference!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/18/2020 6:26:00 PM
Hi Tania. I am honored to have received a placement in your contest. Thank you very much.
Date: 9/11/2020 5:04:00 PM
Hello Jenna … easy to picture the scenes in your poem. Yes autumn often delivers a calm and rustic colours before a winter’s dearth - thank you Jenna - Lindsay
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/11/2020 5:09:00 PM
Thank YOU for such kind comments, Lindsay.
Date: 9/11/2020 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful verse Jenna, I love the autumn, my favourite season but will have to wait another couple of weeks to see it. Good luck. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/11/2020 5:08:00 PM
My favorite, too, Tom. Thanks for always supporting my poetry.
Date: 9/11/2020 7:52:00 AM
What wonderful autumnal imagery of the trees and I feel all warm and snuggly thinking of the camp fire and thick sweaters. a joy to read:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/11/2020 5:07:00 PM
Thank you a lot, Jan. I wanted to be part of the scene.

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