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A Seagull's Plight

a resilient soul hoists his drooping wings dreary but dreamy soars far so high he keeps on searching for his illusive dreams regardless of the storm and height of mountains goes through miles away in his equanimity straight with vision of sunrays on plight are failures not too bad tries again the mighty swords in his heart so much patience and love help him to survive in every vicissitude and kinks of his life oftentimes we can get the melody of what we want if we allow the cacophonies to come Dec. 5, 2012 Form: Suzette Prime First Place Contest: Suzette Prime: Prime Numbers and Philosophy Judged: 12/14/2012 Poet Sponsor: Suzette Crous

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Date: 3/24/2013 7:38:00 AM
Excellent philosophical poem about dreams, wonderful Leonora!
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Date: 12/29/2012 11:13:00 AM
Revisiting this one and I am seeing you WON. Awesome, and a belated congrats to you. I really should have tried this one out!!
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Date: 12/17/2012 4:48:00 PM
WOW,,, I wrote one about seagull's back when I was 16, last century ;},,, not posted. I enjoyed the story . don't forget to have a blessed Christmas ;}
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Date: 12/16/2012 10:35:00 PM
Ah, you took me on a journey there, Leonora. Great imagery, lovely poem. Will read more. Happy Holidays! Always, Annalise
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Date: 12/16/2012 10:01:00 AM
I could feel the flight and wind on my wings. Thank you.
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Date: 12/16/2012 9:37:00 AM
Way to go, I enjoyed this prime grade A piece of Poetry.
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Date: 12/15/2012 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot Leonora love xx
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Date: 12/14/2012 9:02:00 PM
Hello Leo, my sweet sis-ie pooh... how are... I'm seeing an awesome win here... wish I understood this form... , congratulations in the "SUZETTE PRIME:" contest... :-) PD
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Date: 12/14/2012 6:33:00 PM
Congrad's on your win in this challenging form Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2012 6:04:00 PM
I especially like the last two lines..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Your time spent reading my work is appreciated..Sara
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Date: 12/12/2012 10:01:00 PM
Hi Leo, are you around.. soup mail...pd
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Date: 12/6/2012 10:40:00 AM
sheer classic poetry this, a wonderful rendering i enjoyed ever so much
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Date: 12/6/2012 7:32:00 AM
"Dreary but dreamy" - I love that. This is a wonderful write. Great job!!
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Date: 12/5/2012 10:41:00 PM
Brilliant write with an exceptional theme. This one is a favourite!
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Date: 12/5/2012 9:20:00 PM
Suzette, is going to love this my sis... cacophonies... is that a sound of something. never heard of the word... Leo, love the image,, wonder what they are really thinking... enjoyed... hope to hear from you soon,,, xox~pd
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Date: 12/6/2012 7:54:00 AM
Thank you my sis and everyone here! Cacophonies means noisy and very loud sounds just like what you create when still trying to perfect your skills in musical instruments. Again, million thanks and good night. Sorry if I can't stay long here on soup because I'm still recovering from flu.
Date: 12/5/2012 4:27:00 PM
wow, the way you summed up your idea in those last two lines. Wonderful lines, Leonora. I'm happy to see you posting this new poem!!
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Date: 12/5/2012 3:56:00 PM
You are a trooper I haven't tried the form yet sounds like awinner. Light & Love
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Date: 12/5/2012 10:06:00 AM
wow!! superb write indeed...You are truly a gifted poet my dear Norie...so creative...Good luck..anyway It s a sure winner for me...Good day!! hugs, Mary
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Date: 12/5/2012 7:18:00 AM
A beauty of expression Leonora. An exceptional write. Warm wishes, Connie
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Date: 12/5/2012 6:05:00 AM
A poem that heat completely into the heart, Leonora. - It's beautiful!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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