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A Sea Haiku

a fisherman's boat
floating far out at sea
undulating moon
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Placed 4th
8th May, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/16/2018 9:39:00 AM
What a magical piece Paul.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. Glad you appreciate these few lines. Regards // paul
Date: 5/16/2018 3:41:00 AM
ah i could picture it and tis a lovely sight! undulating moon, lovely, lovely luna!
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Date: 5/16/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thank you for your delightful reaction, Maria:) Pleased to see you posting again. Regards // paul
Date: 5/13/2018 5:03:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win (I agree with Andrea it should have been much higher) :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/16/2018 1:54:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Pity you and Andrea were not on the judging panel:) Hugs // paul
Date: 5/13/2018 3:16:00 PM
Paul. This one is so pretty. It deserves higher!! Congrats, my friend.
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Date: 5/16/2018 1:52:00 PM
That is most generous of you, Andrea. I certainly won't contradict you:) :) Best regards // paul
Date: 5/13/2018 1:09:00 AM
Congratulations on this peaceful image Paul. Tom.
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Date: 5/15/2018 5:13:00 PM
Thank you for the double visit and congrats, Tom. Regards // paul
Date: 5/12/2018 3:07:00 PM
Beautiful! Many congrats on your win, Paul. Elaine
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Date: 5/16/2018 1:33:00 PM
I'm pleased you like it, Elaine...thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 5/12/2018 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Paul, love the imagery ... eve
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Date: 5/16/2018 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Regards & Hugs // paul
Date: 5/12/2018 10:10:00 AM
You mezmerize with your words, dear. I love your words. Undulating.... how sensually sweet. Please check your email. Hugs
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Date: 5/16/2018 12:57:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely feedback, Eileen. Mail acknowledged and answered. Hugs // paul
Date: 5/12/2018 8:39:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great 4th place in the contest, Paul :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/16/2018 12:36:00 PM
Thank you. Anne-Lise:) Excuse the late reply! Hugs // paul
Date: 5/11/2018 11:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Paul. Congrats.
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:59:00 AM
Many thanks, Line. Best regards // paul
Date: 5/10/2018 7:08:00 PM
Stunning solitary imagery, Paul, 'neath the moon's reflection in ebb and flow with the sea. Eerily beautiful! Warmest wishes and hugs, my wonderful friend ~Susan
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Date: 5/16/2018 12:34:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. Took me a while to reply to your comment...the page keeps freezing, and even though I refresh, it continues to play me around. "Eerily beautiful" is a meaningful phrase! Your delightful choice of words is always appreciated, my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 5/10/2018 8:35:00 AM
Oh!That's so fantastic. Stunning Imagery.
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Date: 5/16/2018 11:12:00 AM
I love your superb reaction, Supraja...thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 5/10/2018 7:59:00 AM
Floating not sailing, oh sounds ominous to me paul, excellent haiku, there is so much to ponder on...
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Date: 5/16/2018 11:04:00 AM
You catch on quickly, Harry:) Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Regards // paul
Date: 5/9/2018 7:55:00 AM
You couldn't have painted a better picture even on canvas Paul. This Haiku says it all verbally and visually. You are a true master.. A FAVE from me...Maria Hugs:)
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:45:00 AM
You are too kind, Maria:)...thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 5/9/2018 6:14:00 AM
Your captured the moments well in your poem Paul. I see the fisherman on the boat and the moon above..well executed haiku.
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Date: 5/16/2018 2:43:00 PM
Just realized that there is no reply to your comment, Vijay, though I'm sure I wrote one earlier on. Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul
Date: 5/9/2018 5:55:00 AM
Excellent and lovely imagery write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/15/2018 5:23:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely remarks, Ravi. Regards // paul
Date: 5/9/2018 3:03:00 AM
What a peaceful image this is Paul .great hakiu Tom.
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Date: 5/15/2018 5:17:00 PM
Pleased you enjoyed it, Tom; thank you. Regards // paul
Date: 5/8/2018 7:32:00 PM
Nice imagery...I felt the waves rolling...All the best Paul
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Date: 5/9/2018 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo. Those rolling waves are not good for unseasoned sailors! Regards // paul
Date: 5/8/2018 5:51:00 PM
lovely imagery Paul, I can picture the scene on your beautiful Island:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2018 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. A big welcome to my first commenting visitor:) Hugs // paul