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A Sea Haiku

a fisherman's boat
floating far out at sea
undulating moon

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Placed 4th
8th May, 2018

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/16/2018 9:39:00 AM

What a magical piece Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 2:03:00 PM

Thank you, Richard. Glad you appreciate these few lines. Regards // paul

Hija De La Luna

Date: 5/16/2018 3:41:00 AM

ah i could picture it and tis a lovely sight! undulating moon, lovely, lovely luna!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 2:13:00 PM

Thank you for your delightful reaction, Maria:) Pleased to see you posting again. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2018 5:03:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats on your win (I agree with Andrea it should have been much higher) :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 1:54:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Pity you and Andrea were not on the judging panel:) Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 3:16:00 PM

Paul. This one is so pretty. It deserves higher!! Congrats, my friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 1:52:00 PM

That is most generous of you, Andrea. I certainly won't contradict you:) :) Best regards // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/13/2018 1:09:00 AM

Congratulations on this peaceful image Paul. Tom.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/15/2018 5:13:00 PM

Thank you for the double visit and congrats, Tom. Regards // paul

Elaine George

Date: 5/12/2018 3:07:00 PM

Beautiful! Many congrats on your win, Paul. Elaine

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 1:33:00 PM

I'm pleased you like it, Elaine...thank you! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2018 2:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, Paul, love the imagery ... eve

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 1:32:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. Regards & Hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/12/2018 10:10:00 AM

You mezmerize with your words, dear. I love your words. Undulating.... how sensually sweet. Please check your email. Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 12:57:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely feedback, Eileen. Mail acknowledged and answered. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2018 8:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great 4th place in the contest, Paul :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 12:36:00 PM

Thank you. Anne-Lise:) Excuse the late reply! Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/11/2018 11:48:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Paul. Congrats.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 10:59:00 AM

Many thanks, Line. Best regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/10/2018 7:08:00 PM

Stunning solitary imagery, Paul, 'neath the moon's reflection in ebb and flow with the sea. Eerily beautiful! Warmest wishes and hugs, my wonderful friend ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 12:34:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. Took me a while to reply to your comment...the page keeps freezing, and even though I refresh, it continues to play me around. "Eerily beautiful" is a meaningful phrase! Your delightful choice of words is always appreciated, my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/10/2018 8:35:00 AM

Oh!That's so fantastic. Stunning Imagery.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 11:12:00 AM

I love your superb reaction, Supraja...thank you! Regards // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/10/2018 7:59:00 AM

Floating not sailing, oh sounds ominous to me paul, excellent haiku, there is so much to ponder on...

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 11:04:00 AM

You catch on quickly, Harry:) Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 5/9/2018 7:55:00 AM

You couldn't have painted a better picture even on canvas Paul. This Haiku says it all verbally and visually. You are a true master.. A FAVE from me...Maria Hugs:)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/16/2018 10:45:00 AM

You are too kind, Maria:)...thank you! Regards // paul