Premiere Contest WinnerA Scraping of Shovels

Wind blows ashes all around,
as men toil – bent over at an arduous task.
In the place where a scraping of shovels incises the coming night,
their blades incise cold and black encrusted ground.

Attached to the shovels' handles
are arms which are skeletons,
and the arms belong to bruised, decrepit bodies.
Hacking and wheezing, the men continue smiting the earth -
plunging the shovels down, lifting them up with dirt,
and tossing the dirt to the side.
Plunging, lifting, tossing dirt – again and again and again.
The men are so frail they barely can continue,
but with the armed guards watching on,
they dare not falter and come to a stop.

Coming from the gloom are shrieks,
and then comes that all too-familar stench
after the shrieks have died out.
It permeates the air and seeps into their nostrils,
and still they toil at the trench.

They struggle on beneath a sky which for a long time now
has withheld from them its light,
and the light of hope is but a dream 
that perhaps crosses their minds from time to time.
Perhaps in their dreams at night
as they lie on crude and uncomfortable "beds,"
they imagine they are digging tunnels -
tunnels which will lead them away from all this misery,
but their misery is a nightmare from which they can’t awake.

What horror in their knowing that their own bodies
might one day soon be lying too
in these graves they dig.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Delaney Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations Andrea: A stunning look at man’s inhumanity for man. Makes the golden rule never seem so more important. Luv, SuZ
Agustin Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 2:30 AM
Congrats... Thanks again for sharing this... God bless you.
A   Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 1:49 AM
Hello Andrea, I'm not doing much on commenting these days. However, I'm truly glad to see you on my list. CONGRATULATIONS, and thank you so much for this entry. At one point while reading this poem, I thought to myself, this is perfect, (in my book). However, I was not going to place the poem, because I asked for 17 max lines. LOL, I had a few who went over 17. I had to break my rules because this is really good. I also, love, love, and love the Title. Very different, if you ask me. LUV LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 6:23 PM
thanks so much for breaking your rule for me. I think it's early dementia. I keep messing up more and more with sponsors' contest rules.
Kauffman Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 12:39 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. Such a powerful, moving story and picture of the horror of a concentration camp. We needs always remember the "scraping of shovels."
Sietesantos Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations on your win! Another brilliant poem that is so deserving of high praises! Hugs. Pandita
Chiri Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 8:04 PM
As always Andrea your amazing! Wonderful write and congrats on your win!;)
Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Stunning and stirring write Andrea, really got me...thanks for your entry, congrats on a fine win!
Breedt Avatar
April 2, 2019 at 11:37 PM
Hi Andrea, popping in I looked at your winner cup. You touch a nerve and depict the unbelief of mankinds utmost cruelty. Make us look my lady, make us feel. Wonderful write. Yesterday they burnt 5 people alive in my town 40 km away. Foreigners. Unthinkable. Love J
Fairchild Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 6:18 PM
Brilliant! The recordings of this kind of thing were a long time in my imagination and reading your poem is almost like having a memory come up, so vivid, and correct it is. Thank God, that there is also Love in the world!
Cornish Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Andrea Dietrich wrote this!!! Hmmm, your comfort zone was left far behind and I like it/LOVE it because you can Obviously escape the gravity of rhyme and rhythm and with a dramatic flair at that! A very well deserved congrats earned in a true contest!
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 10:27 AM
Such a moving poem Andrea. he horrors of the holocaust will always haunt us and they should never be forgotten, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 10:13 AM
What a gripping, sad write, Andrea..the horrors and inhumanity of the holocaust are well portrayed in this heart wrenching act you describe. Congrats on your top win!
Canerdy Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 9:44 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Andrea! SO moving and descriptive of misery! Janice
Godwin Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 9:33 AM
Yay you!
Lawless Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Andrea, this one grabbed me and held me from the first line. An artful write in remembrance of so much horror, the sound of death on the scraping of shovels.
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 6:28 AM
I can see this picture of the holocaust very vividly in this work. What a horrible time for all people in Hilter's path. Thanks for dropping by with a kind review of my work. Sara
Michael Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 5:06 AM
Sounds like the chain gang...but we all do it in one way or the other...Well done...
Godwin Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 7:13 PM
You went long but grabbed my attention quick and held it throughout. When I realized where 'I thought' you were going, I was braced for the end so avoided crying (I surmised they WERE digging their own graves, but in my mind, I pictured them laying in them, shot, upon completion.) Great telling, great idea and written by a great spirit. Soupmail. Love ... CayCay
Krutsinger Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 6:45 PM
This brought to my mind coal miners, and World War II. I like it when a poem brings more than one possibility to my mind. Thank you Andrea. It is wonderful.
Kiser Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 6:43 PM
I imagine that the horror of that job lingered with them a very long, long time if not for the rest of their lives. How painful to have had such a job and lived to tell about it. Still, we must tell when we get a chance because it's best not to ever forget. When we forget, we risk something similar again. Well penned.
Bauer Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 5:42 PM
masterfully done, andrea! you've really painted a very vivid picture of one of the most horrible episodes in human history, one which i still have trouble wrapping my mind around...
Hinshaw Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 4:58 PM
You recorded a very horrible time in human history very succinctly and a winner for sure. I had thought about something like this for the contest but couldn't pull it together. I think I started a debate on soup with the Sponge vs Seas drying up thing. You say it would be wetter-others say it would be dryer! Whatever!!!! Best to you - Bob
Pandit Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 3:17 PM
There was a time of such horror in human history...so hard to read about the sub-human conditions they endured..hope humanity has learned a few lessons since.
Cunningham Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 1:24 PM
A harrowing verse Andrea, I immediately thought of concentration camps and the prisoners in them. Well written. Tom.
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