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Tripple Rhyme

The idea is to write 6 to 8 lines in which the first, middle and last words in the first line rhyme with those in the lines following.  The mid-rhyme should be as central as possible, it need not be exact.

I know we've wept a sea of selfish, childish, tears, try your best to see beyond those faded fears. Why hurt you, or me, after so many happy years? Cry not, think of how we would dance and drink a few beers, spry as young lovers could be, sharing our hurts and cheers. Shy, my hand on your knee, we'd oft talk till dawn’s light appears. My heart is now free to whisper love words in your ears nigh onto the wee hours, while a scorned moon... leers. (Triple Rhyme) 06/27/2020

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Date: 8/1/2020 10:15:00 PM
What a delightful verse this is Emile. Slowly turning pages of memories to fly in blissful emotions. Congratulations on your win my friend :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/2/2020 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/29/2020 7:09:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my NA/HM contest _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/9/2020 3:12:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

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