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a sane 2-4-2 mixed flow

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a sane 2-4-2 mixed flow     

                           

    today, 

thinking time

   flowing…

  no peace,

children dying

    in war…

    victims,

all those dying

    in vain…

   iced war,

cold melting life

     flowing…        

    love left,

the war took her

      away…

      justice

looking…but not

       seeing…

  

 
today, thinking time flowing… no peace, children dying in war… victims, all those dying in vain… iced war, cold melting life flowing… love left, the war took her away… justice looking…but not seeing…

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