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A Rum Deal

A Poet can get very Glum And she starts to think it's rather Rum When she would like to write A poem that would delight Everyone. Her brain, if it's still there, Has gone on strike Or don't care About the Poet, who holds the pen Who feels she'll never write again Beware, Of brain that has had enough Of the challenge of this rhyming stuff Moon in June and Morn and Dawn Fills some accomplished poet's brains with scorn Yawn. My brain is going senile, My pen does not know what to do, meanwhile Maybe if I had a new pen My brain would start to tick again Fragile Fragile and needs a rest The brain is too tired to give its best I may take a sip of Nelson's blood Which will I hope cause a flood Of Poems so exquisite My brain will revisit And meet the test.

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Date: 4/26/2023 6:32:00 AM
Shirley, I love how you have written this. Poets are always dissing their muse but when inspiration comes, there they are. Excellent writing, old duck:)
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 4/26/2023 5:46:00 PM
Ha! Ha! Innocence is bliss. And miracles do happen sometimes!!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/26/2023 3:22:00 PM
talking bad about them:) You're just being charming now. Playing innocent is turning me on LOL
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 4/26/2023 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel; your generous comment has put a smile on this Old Ducks face that will last all day. I had to look up the word dissing as my muse was still missing. Look after yourself. Shelley
Date: 4/26/2023 4:31:00 AM
I have surely been there Shirley ! What a wonderfully poetic way you have expressed it! May your wishes come true! happy Wednesday xxoo
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 4/26/2023 4:13:00 PM
Thank you, Mike, for taking the time to write such a kind, encouraging comment. Many marvellous poets on PS capture the imagination of the reader and if my muse wakes up this is what I would like to be abe to do. Happy Days, Mike Take care, Shirley
Date: 4/26/2023 1:37:00 AM
Seems we are on the same wavelength.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 4/26/2023 4:23:00 PM
You write beautiful Poetry, Victor. I find it encouraging that Poets like yourself, sometimes cannot think of anything to write about. Thank you for your encouragement. Take care, Shirley

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