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A Rubbing of Hands

Elsie, Lucy, Olive, this small boy's remarkable old aunts. Oh, how they rubbed their hands. But with glee or sorrow? Or even anger? Elsie had a strict-looking expression - when not rubbing her hands. Lucy wore spectacles that pinched her nose and, oh, had such a thin smile - when not rubbing her hands. Olive seemed serious, often frowning at me - when not rubbing her hands. But when they were rubbing their hands they were ridding those hands of flour that helped to make a cake or of flour that helped to make a Yorkshire pudding or of flour that helped to make joy - the joy of making that cake or that Yorkshire pudding; or of spiteful expressions they might wear when sneering at this small boy, who would have to eat their cakes or their Yorkshire pudding, or absorb their sneers - sneers that were also smiles. We remember our aunts in the most remarkable ways. I was a small boy. (April 2023) (Elsie appears in two other poems: "Aunty Elsie's Bathroom" and "Coronation for a King")

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Date: 4/21/2023 8:36:00 AM
well, you paint a vivid portrait of your three aunts..it's funny what sticks in our minds, isn't it? thanks for reading and commenting on my work :)
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Andrew John
Date: 4/24/2023 2:04:00 AM
Thanks, Charlotte. I do have another with these three aunts - who did exist - coming up when we hit the Coronation. The three aunts will be talking about it. I have two other poems already on here: "Trooping the Colour" and "Obsequies for a Queen". both with the main (royal) subject in the background, as will happen with "Coronation for a King".

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