A Rubbing of Hands

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Elsie, Lucy, Olive, this small boy's remarkable old aunts.
Oh, how they rubbed their hands.
But with glee or sorrow? Or even anger?

Elsie had a strict-looking expression - 
when not rubbing her hands.
Lucy wore spectacles that pinched her nose
and, oh, had such a thin smile -
when not rubbing her hands.
Olive seemed serious, often frowning at me -
when not rubbing her hands.

But when they were rubbing their hands
they were ridding those hands of
flour that helped to make a cake or of
flour that helped to make a Yorkshire pudding or of
flour that helped to make joy -
the joy of making that cake or that Yorkshire pudding;
or of spiteful expressions they might wear when sneering
at this small boy, who would have to eat
their cakes or their Yorkshire pudding, or absorb
their sneers - sneers that were also smiles.

We remember our aunts in
the most remarkable ways.
I was a small boy.


(April 2023)
(Elsie appears in two other poems: "Aunty Elsie's Bathroom" and "Coronation for a King")

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/21/2023 8:36:00 AM
well, you paint a vivid portrait of your three aunts..it's funny what sticks in our minds, isn't it? thanks for reading and commenting on my work :)
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Date: 4/24/2023 2:04:00 AM
Thanks, Charlotte. I do have another with these three aunts - who did exist - coming up when we hit the Coronation. The three aunts will be talking about it. I have two other poems already on here: "Trooping the Colour" and "Obsequies for a Queen". both with the main (royal) subject in the background, as will happen with "Coronation for a King".
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