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A Royal Birth

the Sun in the west
smoldering with fire inside
afraid to explode, 
jumped into the waters below.

over this impetuous act 
the Day, in deep regret
snuffing all her grace,
flickered out.

under the cover of darkness
the aquamarine sky witnessed,
the birth of a crescent Moon, 
with angelic glow.

cradled high in the vast expanse,
with sailing seraphs for company
the little princess born, 
would soon be queen of the night sky!

to celebrate the royal birth,
innumerable lights were lit
in the firmament
like burning chandeliers.

the Earth was seen lying dazed,
by this astral illumination
wondering what drama
would yet unfold.

April.11. 2023


~ Placed Eighth~
Brian Strand Contest.No 1212

~ Placed First~

Simply Poetry 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor- John Lawless

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JCB Brul

Date: 5/2/2023 4:43:00 AM

Rich and crisp imagery that never fails to thrill. Congratulations!

David Drowley

Date: 4/23/2023 1:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Very creative birth announcement.

Ann Peck

Date: 4/21/2023 8:41:00 AM

Oh, this is so lovely, Valsa! I'm faving. And congratulations on First Place!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/21/2023 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "A Royal Birth" is a beautiful write. Love it. Have a blessed day writing away........................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/20/2023 8:17:00 PM

Wow! This one is going into my faves, Valsa, astounding, congratulations:)

Valsa George
Date: 4/20/2023 9:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Joanna. Feel quite delighted to know that this has gone into your FAVE list.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/20/2023 5:24:00 PM

Admirable win Valsa . my congratulations. A superb poem with a wonderful double meaning. I was impressed when I read it the first time, and having just read it again, still impressed. Its good enough to be entered in a recognised international competition, and I have never thought that of a poem on here before. Applause ! Wen

Valsa George
Date: 4/20/2023 9:58:00 PM

Wendy, you are quite sweet and generous in your appreciation. Your sincere words are indeed a boost to me. You are a great poet. When I get a compliment from such a person, it is an added incentive. Thanks a lot !

John Lawless

Date: 4/20/2023 2:34:00 PM

BREATHTAKING...SIMPLY...BREATHTAKING Masterfully done ... I had trouble reading it as i kept closing my eyes to visualize the scene. Thanks for participating in the contest

Valsa George
Date: 4/20/2023 7:19:00 PM

Thank you so much dear John for picking up my poem fo the top win. I feel honored. Also grateful for the wonderful words of appreciation.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/12/2023 10:47:00 AM

There is nothing more satisfying than to gaze upwards on a clear night and marvel at the wonders of creation. Love the imagery Valsa. Tom

Valsa George
Date: 4/20/2023 10:00:00 PM

Sky gazing and moon watching are pleasurable pastimes. Thanks a lot dear Tom to know that you liked my poem.

Bill Baker

Date: 4/12/2023 10:29:00 AM

Loved your imagery and smooth flowing words in this one, Valsa. The physical changes in nature are all miracles to me. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Bill

Valsa George
Date: 4/20/2023 10:02:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Bill . Nature indeed is a miracle. Stay blessed....

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/12/2023 10:28:00 AM

We also have the prophetic message as something completely reliable, and you will do well to pay attention to it, as to a light shining in a dark place, until the day dawns and the morning star rises in your hearts. 2 Peter 1:19 NIV Love your poem, my dear friend, May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance: )

Valsa George
Date: 4/20/2023 10:06:00 PM

Glad you could associate my poem with the Biblical verse- Peter 1: 19. Thanks a lot Stephan

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/12/2023 1:11:00 AM

lovely writing. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Valsa George
Date: 4/12/2023 2:06:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear Gina. Stay blessed!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/11/2023 11:28:00 PM

The beginning of a new moon right? A slender appearance of what was to become the queen of the sky when full. Did I read it wrong dear Valsa? Well right or wrong its what I read and its beautiful.

Valsa George
Date: 4/12/2023 2:05:00 AM

You are absolutely right dear Wendy. I have been trying to be a little different from my simple style. Thanks a lot.