A Round Tuit

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                          	                                 .At long.
                                                         Last  we  have  suffi-
                                                     cient  supply  of  these   in-
                                                Valuable  items for  you  to  have
                                              one   of   your   very   own.  Guard it
                                            With   your   life.     These  tuits   have
                                          been   hard   to   come by,  especially the
                                         round   ones.    This   is   an   indispensable
                                        item.     It     will    help  you  to   become a
                                        more    efficient   worker.          How   many
                                        Times   have   you   had   to   say,   “I’ll  do
                                           it   as    soon   as   I   get   a   round   tuit”?
                                            Now   that   you   have   a   round   tuit
                                              of   your   very   own,  many    things
                                                  needing   to   be   done  will   get
                                                             done properly>
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Oyewole Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 11:21 AM
An outstanding write... Congrats on your win~A.O
Delaney Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Very clever concrete poem. Congratulations on your win. SuZ
A   Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Ralph,, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
Gasun Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:20 PM
Many congrats my dear friend Ralph! This is indeed great and amazing inspirational poem ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
A  Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Ralph, a sweet win~*~SKAT
Hendricks Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 7:02 PM
hahaha. Good one, Ralph. Your formatting complements your "tuit' well. Big applause for your top placement in Andrea's "fave poem" contest. Well done, my friend :)
Mister Roboto Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 11:43 PM
I will use this round tuit for various ball games! LOL! ~JS Lambert
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 9:11 PM
oh, yes you are the ceative round to it guy. I wanted to tell you, don't be fooled by my haiku. I too am a rhyming poet. I only do haiku when they have those picture contests. I am not really writing haiku either. but I understand how haiku are supposed to be. Most people here are not doing them right, including myself. I call them "short 3-line descriptive free verse poems with limited syllable count" haha. Anyway, you should try it sometime. They do the traditional syllable count here 5/7/5!!
Belt Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 6:37 PM
This is Good Ralph.....Looks like my MIL's nose.....Larry
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 4:21 PM
this is GENIUS. If you don't place VERY high with this, someone is just not thinking!! LUv, andrea ps this is what I call thinking outside the box and INSIDE the circle. A fav!
Fone Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 4:25 AM
SOOOOO FUNNY!!!!!, you must have met my husband haha
Johnson Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 8:12 PM
Very nice and humorous. Good luck in contest. Thank you for your comments on "My Peaceful Moments" Joyce
La France Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 7:56 PM
Nice shape, well done, mine is a tree, it is called The Tree of Life.. I am sending soup mail.. constance
Culverhouse Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 5:46 PM
love the shape, round tuit--witty. done properly!!
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