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"a Rose From Heaven Grows"

May we always address dis-complacency, the vacancy, And remove all opposes, to our roses,............................................................(Acts 18:4-6) Here at Poetry Soup, completing love’s 100% loop, in our soup, For an authentic rose, from God it grows, always knows, It’s own heart, from which it grows, For authenticity’s, dis-complacency Displaces a rose, from which it grows, then only heaven knows, A rose, from which it grows, Then it tis the mind’s dis-complacency, from it’s own heart, Then does it’s part, hid from it’s own heart, Redresses the rose, then rose begin an oppose, To it’s heart, from which it grows,......................................(II Thes.2:3-5) Ego mind persona A displaced rose, is still a rose, By it’s own authenticity, it still grows, As the heart, still does it’s part, from the very start, For it tis the mind, lost in it’s wilderness time, must realign, With beginning of time, love of heart’s kind, For it tis, redressing of mind, with heart’s beginning of time, That undresses the rose, from it’s dress of the oppose,..........................(II Timothy 2:24-25) For a rose, is still a rose, from whence it grows, Not death’s oppose, Like a tree, grows from inside itself, you see, From an higher intelligence, to be, That being, from it’s own heart, it’s love of start, Like a dog, is a dog, not a hog, Tis it’s central intelligent being, does it’s seeing, Not it’s bureaucracy of fleas, hidden in it’s leaves, Nor living in the hairs of your scalp,- Yeeeeeap! Taking their ease, if you please, As a nation, we have bureaucratic fleas, living in our leaves, The fleas are in control, should a flea be so bold, To tell the truth, tis growing old, Should a parasite raise our taxes, should the parasites waxes us, In our town hall meetings, try to ignore our pleadings, And begin their elite minded proceedings, By saying we are criminals, and it they are the emeralds, Tis our freedom of speech, being bleached, under siege, Should not even a dog own his own fleas, guys pleeeeease! Our government is not a party to our rose, They are opposed, to our rose, the fleas that grows, From the power of our rose, In our leaves, if you please, A parasite, out of sight, must take flight, Tis their complexity, the hex, no flex, too complex, Will bring our nation to it’s knees, so please, Use your voice, of choice, Our fleas have become to numerous, to humor us, Not a plus, but like a rust, Our fleas in charge of us!! 9-20-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Date: 1/12/2010 10:39:00 AM
Another very powerful message you have conveyed here Moses. A message of His Truth! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Your kind comments and words of encouragement are deeply appreciated! Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary
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Date: 12/9/2009 8:01:00 AM
its all been said before me with Panche I shall add a bravo and a well done ... Love Jayne
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Date: 11/27/2009 2:30:00 PM
I LOVE THE WAY THIS POEM IS REPRESENTED SWEETLY WITTY AND WITH A MESSAGE AS ALWAYS..GREAT WRITER INDEED--Charma
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Date: 11/2/2009 6:04:00 PM
Interesting and awesome as always... I so enjoy your verses... thankxxx for liking my Love Senses poem.. I tried to get them all in and by your comment I must have succeeded.. luv your stuff on HGarvay Daniel's Daffy Definitions... hope more poets decide to participate... Linda-Marie have u read his poem about me?
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Date: 10/24/2009 4:35:00 PM
Awesome use of the flea analogy- I see a lot of truth in this poem!
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Date: 10/4/2009 3:18:00 PM
Was a beautiful read.Teresa I try to write longer comments but my decease won't let me I have FA a form of Muscular dystrophy.OK Thanks
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Date: 10/4/2009 10:18:00 AM
painfully true, funny write hot one
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Date: 10/3/2009 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on making the hot poems list. Sara
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Date: 9/30/2009 6:45:00 PM
I love your poetry, John. So complex; yet so simple. Keep on keeping on! Kim
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Date: 9/30/2009 1:54:00 PM
I love Roses.......and the fact that u wrote about them.
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Date: 9/27/2009 2:14:00 AM
This is a very creative piece my friend, indeed it lends voice to powerful thoughts. Well Done... I thank you John for sharing the read and for your lovely comments :-) God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 9/26/2009 8:10:00 AM
Love the title John.Nice work Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:23:00 PM
Wonderful, you have created the life in this piece!
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Date: 9/25/2009 8:02:00 AM
creative write and original the way you get your message on paper to reach all,good job,well penned my friend--Charma
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:48:00 PM
COOL:) I'M A 9/12ER TO. WE THE PEOPLE!
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments John. Take care Patricia
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Date: 9/22/2009 5:53:00 AM
Kool piece John, a delight to read>>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 12:42:00 PM
Very creative and unique. Thank you for recent comments on my poems and for the lovely advice and support Moses, it is greatly appreciated. truely, Trudy
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Date: 9/21/2009 11:39:00 AM
around and around your thoughts do go and where they stop.....Light & Love
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Date: 9/21/2009 6:44:00 AM
Interesting poem.
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Date: 9/20/2009 11:49:00 PM
Powerful poetry John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 9/20/2009 9:38:00 PM
WOW.. this is quite a write, in a very unique style, going from nature behavior's to politics and all in interesting rhyming. Quite an execution of poetry! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 9/20/2009 4:54:00 PM
A lovely creative write....witty as well as spiritual! Good job! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/20/2009 4:35:00 PM
interesting thoughts on complex situations.....nice write!
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Date: 9/20/2009 4:35:00 PM
Oh, Moses. I think I have something in my eye (oh yes - a tear !) This is a beauty of a poem... The language is almost etheral... or of the medieval tongue, which I love. Yes, We must speak out in some form or other... and yes, God's Beautiful Roses cannot be denied... Displaced Roses, your poem say they will survive... Yes that is true This is not a world of our making... but we can make "Our World" a better Place. I love the symbolism you use.. Keep On Hauling The Hearts - Truckman MoonBee
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