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A Rooftop Repose

his day is almost done.
a tranquil getaway, 
yet still at home.
his solitude 
couldn't be more divine.
a rooftop repose; 
his perfect place 
to cogitate, to commune 
with ghosts of the past.
it's where 
he watches the infinite stars;  
ever so visible at twilight.
it's where 
he looks at the vast sky.
the flight of birds from there,
so captivating.
the whirring zephyr on his skin,
the rustling of trees 
so crisp;
nectar from the gods. 
daily hustle and bustle 
muted at dawn.
up on the rooftop
everything is amplified.
a most welcome respite;
his cloud nine.


Writing Challenge - V words - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Theme of choice: Vast
Date written: 04/21/2023

Copyright © Edward Ibeh | Year Posted 2023

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Susan Ashley Date: 4/27/2023 9:57:00 AM Dear Edward, your splendid imagery brings me to this lovely scene where peaceful and contemplative vibes on the rooftop repose abound. There is beauty in moments of solitude. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 4/26/2023 6:32:00 AM Hi Edward, Congratulations on another win with this fine write. Have a great day;-) Alexis Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/26/2023 7:25:00 AM Thank you very much, Alexis:-)

Sam Kauffman Date: 4/25/2023 12:18:00 PM Dual congratulations Edward for your win with Constance and your win with Brian. Every line conveys that peace found at the end of the day just being quiet, absorbing the sunset, the twilight and all of nature from a vantage point high above frenetic chaos!!! Blessings of peace and solitude to you! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/26/2023 7:26:00 AM Thank you so much, Sam:-) It's always a delight to see your feedback, my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/25/2023 9:05:00 AM - Edward, congratulations on your win in the Brian Strand contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/26/2023 7:23:00 AM Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)

Constance La France Date: 4/24/2023 4:57:00 AM Edward, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. ! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/24/2023 7:37:00 AM Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Date: 4/23/2023 7:21:00 PM Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Edward. Well composed poem. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/23/2023 7:35:00 PM Thank you very much, Alfonso:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/23/2023 1:53:00 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Edward - A beautiful poem :) - hugs Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/23/2023 6:31:00 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)

Valsa George Date: 4/22/2023 11:08:00 PM A roof top repose will be sweet. Lovely scenes of the vast sky and the land with trees and gentle breeze as seen from the roof top. Lovely experience. Congratulations Edward on your first place win. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/23/2023 6:31:00 AM Thank you very much, Valsa:-)

Christuraj Alex Date: 4/22/2023 9:14:00 PM A very beautiful illustration of the concept of vast. Congratulations! Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/23/2023 6:29:00 AM Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/22/2023 1:40:00 PM Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed your write. Have a blessed weekend....... Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/22/2023 4:22:00 PM Thank you very much, Paula:-)

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/22/2023 11:45:00 AM Nice write Edward. A rooftop repose to inhale the vast sky. Congratulations on your win! :) Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/22/2023 4:22:00 PM Thank you very much, Linda:-) I think I'll change the title to "A Rooftop Repose"

Alexis Y. Date: 4/22/2023 10:06:00 AM Hi Edward, You composed a good write with the chosen word. Congrats on your win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/22/2023 4:21:00 PM Thank you very much, Alexis:-)

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/21/2023 2:59:00 PM his perfect place to cogitate, to commune with ghosts of the past--you gave his solitude a voice and meaning. His cloud nine--well said, Edward. Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/22/2023 4:21:00 PM Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Heidi Sands Date: 4/21/2023 10:32:00 AM Sounds very nice Edward. Well written :) Login to Reply Edward Ibeh Date: 4/22/2023 4:20:00 PM Thank you very much, Heidi:-)