A Rooftop Repose

his day is almost done.
a tranquil getaway, 
yet still at home.
his solitude 
couldn't be more divine.
a rooftop repose; 
his perfect place 
to cogitate, to commune 
with ghosts of the past.
it's where 
he watches the infinite stars;  
ever so visible at twilight.
it's where 
he looks at the vast sky.
the flight of birds from there,
so captivating.
the whirring zephyr on his skin,
the rustling of trees 
so crisp;
nectar from the gods. 
daily hustle and bustle 
muted at dawn.
up on the rooftop
everything is amplified.
a most welcome respite;
his cloud nine.


Writing Challenge - V words - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Theme of choice: Vast
Date written: 04/21/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 9:57 AM
Dear Edward, your splendid imagery brings me to this lovely scene where peaceful and contemplative vibes on the rooftop repose abound. There is beauty in moments of solitude. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Y. Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Hi Edward, Congratulations on another win with this fine write. Have a great day;-) Alexis
Ibeh Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:25 AM
Thank you very much, Alexis:-)
Kauffman Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Dual congratulations Edward for your win with Constance and your win with Brian. Every line conveys that peace found at the end of the day just being quiet, absorbing the sunset, the twilight and all of nature from a vantage point high above frenetic chaos!!! Blessings of peace and solitude to you!
Ibeh Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:26 AM
Thank you so much, Sam:-) It's always a delight to see your feedback, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 9:05 AM
- Edward, congratulations on your win in the Brian Strand contest :) - hugs
Ibeh Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
La France Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Edward, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
Ibeh Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 7:37 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Edward. Well composed poem.
Ibeh Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 7:35 PM
Thank you very much, Alfonso:-)
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 1:53 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Edward - A beautiful poem :) - hugs
Ibeh Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
George Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 11:08 PM
A roof top repose will be sweet. Lovely scenes of the vast sky and the land with trees and gentle breeze as seen from the roof top. Lovely experience. Congratulations Edward on your first place win.
Ibeh Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa:-)
Alex Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 9:14 PM
A very beautiful illustration of the concept of vast. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed your write. Have a blessed weekend.......
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Fowler Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Nice write Edward. A rooftop repose to inhale the vast sky. Congratulations on your win! :)
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:22 PM
Thank you very much, Linda:-) I think I'll change the title to "A Rooftop Repose"
Y. Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 10:06 AM
Hi Edward, You composed a good write with the chosen word. Congrats on your win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:21 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis:-)
Pandit Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 2:59 PM
his perfect place to cogitate, to commune with ghosts of the past--you gave his solitude a voice and meaning. His cloud nine--well said, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:21 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Sands Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Sounds very nice Edward. Well written :)
Ibeh Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:20 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)
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