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A Rooftop Repose

his day is almost done. a tranquil getaway, yet still at home. his solitude couldn't be more divine. a rooftop repose; his perfect place to cogitate, to commune with ghosts of the past. it's where he watches the infinite stars; ever so visible at twilight. it's where he looks at the vast sky. the flight of birds from there, so captivating. the whirring zephyr on his skin, the rustling of trees so crisp; nectar from the gods. daily hustle and bustle muted at dawn. up on the rooftop everything is amplified. a most welcome respite; his cloud nine. Writing Challenge - V words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme of choice: Vast Date written: 04/21/2023

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Date: 4/27/2023 9:57:00 AM
Dear Edward, your splendid imagery brings me to this lovely scene where peaceful and contemplative vibes on the rooftop repose abound. There is beauty in moments of solitude. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/26/2023 6:32:00 AM
Hi Edward, Congratulations on another win with this fine write. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/26/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank you very much, Alexis:-)
Date: 4/25/2023 12:18:00 PM
Dual congratulations Edward for your win with Constance and your win with Brian. Every line conveys that peace found at the end of the day just being quiet, absorbing the sunset, the twilight and all of nature from a vantage point high above frenetic chaos!!! Blessings of peace and solitude to you!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/26/2023 7:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam:-) It's always a delight to see your feedback, my friend.
Date: 4/25/2023 9:05:00 AM
- Edward, congratulations on your win in the Brian Strand contest :) - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/26/2023 7:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 4/24/2023 4:57:00 AM
Edward, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/24/2023 7:37:00 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 4/23/2023 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Edward. Well composed poem.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/23/2023 7:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Alfonso:-)
Date: 4/23/2023 1:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Edward - A beautiful poem :) - hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/23/2023 6:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 4/22/2023 11:08:00 PM
A roof top repose will be sweet. Lovely scenes of the vast sky and the land with trees and gentle breeze as seen from the roof top. Lovely experience. Congratulations Edward on your first place win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/23/2023 6:31:00 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa:-)
Date: 4/22/2023 9:14:00 PM
A very beautiful illustration of the concept of vast. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/23/2023 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 4/22/2023 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed your write. Have a blessed weekend.......
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/22/2023 4:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Date: 4/22/2023 11:45:00 AM
Nice write Edward. A rooftop repose to inhale the vast sky. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/22/2023 4:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda:-) I think I'll change the title to "A Rooftop Repose"
Date: 4/22/2023 10:06:00 AM
Hi Edward, You composed a good write with the chosen word. Congrats on your win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/22/2023 4:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis:-)
Date: 4/21/2023 2:59:00 PM
his perfect place to cogitate, to commune with ghosts of the past--you gave his solitude a voice and meaning. His cloud nine--well said, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/22/2023 4:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 4/21/2023 10:32:00 AM
Sounds very nice Edward. Well written :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/22/2023 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)

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