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A Robin lifted my soul, as it took wing on the breath of spring. Red breasts caught my eye, against a blue sky. Donning its costume, color was in bloom. And on looking down, green grew all around. I heard a bird sing, and on the upswing a Robin lifted my soul; as it took wing. (Rhyme) 5/07/2021

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Date: 5/7/2021 6:29:00 PM
Beautiful, Dear Poet! Love the creativity of the form, and the content absolutely matched it. Truly enjoyed! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 5/8/2021 6:06:00 AM
Thanks Mala, your words form a wonderful melody for my ears. Emile.
Date: 5/7/2021 4:57:00 PM
Absolutely lovely Emile. So glad I got to meet you. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/8/2021 6:06:00 AM
Thank you Judy, for taking the time and care to give me this truly wonderful review, Emile.
Date: 5/7/2021 11:08:00 AM
I love a well written poem, Emile. This one is exceptional!
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Date: 5/7/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Daniel, you know how to create a smile, and I appreciate it my friend, Emile

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