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A Ripple Cracks

A ripple cracks the river's size, to tame the flood and unfold the sky~ 2/15/23 A ripple to me contest Sponsor: JCB Brul Syllable count verified on poetrysoup's syllable counter

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/15/2023 10:27:00 AM

Gorgeous writing, Michelle! Wow. :)

Brian Sambourne

Date: 3/26/2023 3:56:00 PM

Very imaginative. The ripple described is powerful indeed. Best wishes. Brian

Paul Callus

Date: 2/26/2023 10:57:00 AM

Lovely and creative, Michelle. Congrats on your win. Regards // paul

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/25/2023 8:29:00 PM

A splendid poem painting miniaturized! Powerful with seen beauty, too.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/25/2023 5:50:00 PM

So nicely written! Congratulations on your win, Michelle.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2023 5:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Very unique one for sure. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2023 3:31:00 PM

very unique one. Congrats on the win.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/18/2023 9:04:00 PM

A new observation is revealed. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Ann Peck

Date: 2/18/2023 2:57:00 PM

That is so beautiful, Michelle. ...unfold the sky~ lovely! Congratulations!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/18/2023 7:30:00 AM

SO creative, Michelle! CONGRATS! Janice

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/17/2023 7:56:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/17/2023 1:03:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. Have a great day/weekend...............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2023 9:25:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Michelle -

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/17/2023 9:24:00 AM

Michelle, your writing is always beautiful with deep water flowing beneath the surface to be waded into with delight! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/16/2023 12:52:00 PM

I enjoyed this fun write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/15/2023 6:45:00 PM

Sweet rhythm!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/15/2023 6:09:00 PM

Perfectly written Monoku, reflecting the real meaning of ripple beautifully. Win Big Michelle