A Ripple

I wrestle with ripples of unrest, you calm me before the tide turns. A Ripple To Me Poetry Contest 14th February 2023 Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Date: 2/20/2023 3:38:00 PM

this one is so sweet. Congrats.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/20/2023 11:10:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, your comments are much appreciated:)

Date: 2/18/2023 9:22:00 PM

Wrestling with "ripples of unrest" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/18/2023 11:09:00 PM

Thank you, glad you liked it :)

Date: 2/18/2023 2:14:00 PM

I appreciate how you were able to apply "ripples" to something other than water. Very original DD :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/18/2023 3:01:00 PM

Thanks FJ - hopefully you'll like the Ripples 2 for the second contest as well :)

Date: 2/17/2023 8:04:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/17/2023 11:08:00 PM

Thank you Beata, I'm glad you enjoyed it

Date: 2/17/2023 9:29:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, D.D. -

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/17/2023 9:30:00 AM

Ooh thank you!

Date: 2/14/2023 11:59:00 PM

I like this one, DD:)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/15/2023 12:03:00 AM

Thank you Jo, it was challenging trying to get meaning into so few words. Glad you like it :)

Date: 2/14/2023 3:24:00 PM

What a clever Monoku, Good luck in the contest, Dilly Dally, Take care, Shirley

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/14/2023 11:19:00 PM

Thank you Shirley - I had to wrack my brains for imagery within a one liner.

Date: 2/14/2023 11:42:00 AM

Great one :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/14/2023 12:26:00 PM

Thank you very much : )