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A Reflection

o youth,where did you go
those yesterdays,still glow
pure white,as virgin snow

whose face is this I see,
is this really me;
where,where did youth flee

inside,still seems bran new
my youthful outlook,stays
albeit,passing days

a future lies ahead
beyond the grave,He said
the narrow path,to tread

in a resurrected body,new
for what I did for you 


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/2/2020 6:41:00 PM
Well done, Brian,,, enjoyed reading
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Brian Strand
Date: 1/3/2020 2:48:00 AM
Cheers Eve,a creative 2020 to you
Date: 7/13/2011 11:16:00 PM
A MASTERPEICE! Brian. Elaine. To my fav's
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:15:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Brian. Hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 4:35:00 AM
reads beautifully, nice subject too, really enjoyed that one.
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Date: 6/28/2011 4:32:00 AM
Interesting one..Questions that most ask at some point in their lives..Thanks for selecting my work to be in the winners' circle..Sara
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