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A Red Moon

Love was as hot as a red moon. Passion was on fire and was soothed. A total lunar eclipse occurred on April 15. The moon was coopery red. The warmth of her blood was astrologically aligned. Mother Earth was with her Sun God. She stood majestically in his eyes. The core of his being was a deep arousal of desire. Oblivion Dark Sunshine Spiritual Poetess Sought the Red Moon via telescope, a ritualized ceremony. ________________________/ Sponsor: Dave Wood Contest Name: RED MOON 04/14/2014

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Date: 6/8/2014 10:45:00 AM
Fine poem describing the eclipse Verlena, and belated congratulations on your win, James :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/8/2014 4:34:00 PM
Thanks for you supportive remarks James. Happy you enjoyed A Red Moon... Verlena
Date: 5/10/2014 1:56:00 PM
Dear Verlena, Quite an impressive description of the eclipse. I especially enjoyed the lines: The warmth of her blood was astrologically aligned. Mother Earth was with her Sun God. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/10/2014 2:23:00 PM
Thanks for you supportive remarks Carolyn. Verlena
Date: 5/8/2014 1:35:00 PM
ohhh, so sizzling, verlena,, big congrats and huggs
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/8/2014 2:25:00 PM
Thanks for your supportive remarks Nette. Verlena
Date: 5/7/2014 10:10:00 AM
Love the take of these couplets; snaps of passion and romance. enjoyable. congrats on win. // paul
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/7/2014 11:42:00 AM
Thanks Paul for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 5/7/2014 9:56:00 AM
like your take Verlena congrats on win hugs
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/7/2014 11:42:00 AM
Thanks Shadow fro your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 5/7/2014 8:11:00 AM
Verlena, I got lost in the wonder of your muse. Heartfelt congratulations.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/7/2014 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Mark for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 5/7/2014 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful expressions on the red moon. Congrats on the win, verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/7/2014 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 5/7/2014 5:19:00 AM
Verlena u cud capture certainly some very lovely moments ,, wonderful couplet n so is the win ! congrats !
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/7/2014 11:44:00 AM
Thanks Upma for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 5/6/2014 9:38:00 PM
A very romantic moment. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/6/2014 9:43:00 PM
Thanks Joyce for your supportive words... Verlena
Date: 4/19/2014 11:17:00 AM
Beautiful :) Ana
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/19/2014 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Ana... Verlena
Date: 4/15/2014 6:55:00 PM
Nicely done. I heard about this too late I think!!! GOod luck in the contest.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/15/2014 8:46:00 PM
Thanks Andrea... Verlena

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