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A Red Christmas Bike

it was the week after Christmas, the one when fate had granted me my fondest wish,..... (a lustrous, ruby-red, Schwinn bicycle that sported a basket in the front, and a bell to ring.) On that cold, late December night, I'll always remember how suddenly the sky was stained by the color of alarm My young mother leaving her warm bed at three in the morning without tying her robe, rousing us all with calm haste Deep red reflections seeped through mud-splashed window screens as she shooed us like sheep, down raw-grained stairs. She pushed us from behind with her two hands, out the door, and onto a frost-slick back porch, into the wee hours of early light. By then, wide-eyed, we stood and watched the fire from a safe distance, as it consumed our garage. And, my bike. From the frame of the doorway, and the top step's narrow slat she enveloped me in her folds of chenille to keep me from shivering. The cool of her hand on my shoulders, watching my dad in his attempt with a hose, to douse the inferno, all the while, in a faltering voice, warning him to keep safe. Sounds of sirens wailed in the distance When I looked up into her face, with anxious eyes I remember her soft, reassuring voice "Hush now, don't cry" "Everything will be alright." I don't remember much after that, except looking down, at her bare feet turning blue in the cold _____________________________________________________________

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Date: 12/27/2014 10:12:00 AM
Nice win Carrie...PD
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Date: 12/13/2014 7:07:00 PM
Geez Carrie, my bike memory was a sad one too, I hope you did get warm again & at some point the red bike but oh what a great mother, she is the real gift. Happy Holy Days. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/13/2014 2:44:00 PM
many congratulations Carrie made me quite emotional :-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:30:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your 1st Place win for your very emotional narrative of a sad time in your life. I loved the last line..."her bare feet turning blue in the cold..." A tribute to what mothers will endure for love and protection of family. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:03:00 PM
Carrie congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie. I really enjoyed your story. It brought tears to my eyes thinking about it.
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Date: 12/1/2013 7:08:00 AM
A great story shared in this excellent poem of yours my dear friend Carrie! Thank u so much for sharing! My biggest hearty congratulations on your super win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/30/2013 7:35:00 PM
An impressive poem Carrie.Works of established poets are supposed to be so.Great poem to cherish. : ) Jenish.
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Date: 11/29/2013 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie..well done
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Date: 11/29/2013 7:21:00 PM
I knew this would win! fav phrase [enveloped me in her folds of chenille ] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2013 12:07:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/28/2013 12:44:00 PM
Carrie, you made a masterpiece from your memories!
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Date: 11/26/2013 3:07:00 PM
Wow Carry, you must have been so scared, and yet so proud of your Mom& Dad . Light & Love
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Date: 11/26/2013 10:01:00 AM
Awwwwwww! This was a very deep & memorable moment for you. I got many goosebumps & deep vibes from this read. Beautiful job!
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Date: 11/25/2013 8:56:00 PM
Beautiful Carrie, kind of like mine..I cen empathize.. Beautifully written. BG
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Date: 11/25/2013 8:01:00 PM
oh carrie, you have nailed this one! such a poignant memory and such an amazingly moving poem. every detail was perfect, from the untied robe to the feet turning blue. bravo! (i hope you got another red bike...)
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Date: 11/25/2013 7:47:00 PM
Very poignant emotions displayed of a brief unforgettable moment
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