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Written on December 2, 2023

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I once thought of winter as the grave, Of all the seasons, it wouldn’t behave. Always bitter, never would it save, Grimacing and weeping, though quite brave. Musings of hearths and blazing fires, Held my thoughts, my heart’s desires. Warming my bones from Winter’s satires, Birds chirping from frosty nests despite kindly lairs. I always felt the chill of the season’s snows, All the way into my bones as my blood slows, Reflecting darkest anguish who’d expose, Suffering sentiments, my feelings mostly froze. Thoughts of springtime would silence my soul, Bringing me stirrings of laughter to console. Despite the dark days, the nights of burning coal, My heart was breaking beneath my self-control. I never realized that even Winter has her beauty, She isn’t like spring or summer with their booty, Autumn doesn’t seem as chilling, though so fruity, Her blankets of snow paint a land so heavy duty. Beneath her flakes, showering the heart with bliss, She feels like a light, glistening in shadows, a kiss, Risking the dance to trembling, happenstance, she’ll miss… All the wonder found in the plunder when we reminisce. Thus, as time left me with understanding, I became… In love with Winter, the bitter chill, the endless flame, A blazing fire, a warm cup of tea, a feeling that came… To carry me through this frosty season of joy to proclaim!

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Date: 12/3/2023 7:33:00 AM
This is a stunning poem and the picture made me smile - such beauty in your words. :)
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Date: 12/3/2023 4:01:00 AM
A magnificent poem my friend. Winter is a beautiful season...to be looked at through my window as I drink hot chocolate and warm my toes by the fire. Have a great day Regina.
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Date: 12/2/2023 3:36:00 PM
just lovely, Gina! I, too, have a tendency to look upon winter negatively...until this winter when, like you, I began seeing the astounding beauty and tranquility that winter offers us. Wonderful rhyme scheme and beautiful imagery. I liked the last two lines...they'll stay with me. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 12/2/2023 10:55:00 AM
Wow you always paint imagery in such a euphonious and captivating manner dear gina, i see the magic of winter through your artistic wordplay, and i cant help but be in awe of your rhymes especially “ I never realized that even Winter has her beauty, She isn’t like spring or summer with their booty, Autumn doesn’t seem as chilling, though so fruity, Her blankets of snow paint a land so heavy duty” brilliant! You are a true talented rhymester! Impeccable. Fave for me. Sending you light always
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Date: 12/2/2023 7:33:00 AM
woah what an epic poem for this contest.. your muse has been inspirational recently.... love the imagery and the cold feeling to it, this could have been for the winter sonata contest also... i do love the rhymes and the penultimate stanza is my favourite...I posted for this contest today also how love helped me grow and change how I think.. Best of luck in the contest my friend.
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