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A Rare Phenomenon-W

Everyday my beautiful neighbor lovely luring Lily
Stands under the sun and gazes at it directly.
One day, her gaze the sun could not bear
Set earlier than usual, a phenomenon very rare.

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Third place winner
Contest : Giggle Poetry (Clerihew)
Dr. Ram Mehta

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Robin Davis Date: 8/25/2014 9:48:00 PM Dr. Ram A cute and clever rhyme that made me smile and chuckle. Thank you for the nice comment on my Fish poem. Login to Reply

Date: 8/22/2010 10:20:00 AM Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on your third place finish in the contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/19/2010 10:42:00 PM Hey, here I see you again tonight. Congratulations, Dr. Ram! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 8/19/2010 12:59:00 AM Congratz Dr. Ram Metha on your well deserved 3rd place Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 8/18/2010 4:09:00 PM wow,(: a clever poet indeed. don't stare at the sun! & congrats to you. ~Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 8/18/2010 11:43:00 AM congrats on your win Dr. Ram Login to Reply

Susan Mills Date: 8/18/2010 9:28:00 AM Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the clerihew contest! A lovely poem! Love, Susan Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 8/18/2010 8:51:00 AM Interested in the neighbors? I think it's great...and the write is even better. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/18/2010 4:52:00 AM Congratulations Dr.Ram on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 8/17/2010 9:59:00 PM Heartiest Congrats on your win dear Dr. mehta. Many thanks for your comments and encouragement. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 8/17/2010 8:57:00 PM Dr Ram, congratulations on your 3rd place :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2010 6:52:00 PM Congratulations for you too!! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/17/2010 5:51:00 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in the Giggles Poetry contest .. another brilliant write and super win to enjoy my friend.. with luv.. caio.. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/17/2010 5:42:00 PM Very clever, Doctor. congratulations. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/17/2010 5:42:00 PM Well done, Dr. Ram!! She stared the sun down!! How clever!! Congratulations....nice to share 3rd with you! :) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/17/2010 5:16:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 8/17/2010 5:03:00 PM Phenomenal victory with this third place write, Dr Ram. Congratulations! Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/17/2010 3:25:00 PM Quite witty, Dr. Ram. But you better warn Lily that staring at the sun can cause blindness. Like the way you made it seem that the sun needed to break away from her stare. Best wishes in John's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/17/2010 12:12:00 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dr. Ram. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 8/17/2010 4:50:00 AM hehe, love the twist Dr. Ram.. enjoyed your unique clerihew, Wilma Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/17/2010 1:38:00 AM enjoyed this Clerihew, Harry Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/16/2010 9:31:00 PM wow, that is quite the ending, like a twist! She must be stunning, sunning!! LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 8/16/2010 8:49:00 PM Hahaha! So funny :) I wonder what's next? A Solar Eclipse with this LIly :) Thanks for you nice comment. By the way where is the next International Poetry Meeting? Login to Reply