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A Rare Phenomenon-W

Everyday my beautiful neighbor lovely luring Lily Stands under the sun and gazes at it directly. One day, her gaze the sun could not bear Set earlier than usual, a phenomenon very rare. ================================== Third place winner Contest : Giggle Poetry (Clerihew) Dr. Ram Mehta

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Robin Davis

Date: 8/25/2014 9:48:00 PM

Dr. Ram A cute and clever rhyme that made me smile and chuckle. Thank you for the nice comment on my Fish poem.

Date: 8/22/2010 10:20:00 AM

Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Congratulations on your third place finish in the contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2010 10:42:00 PM

Hey, here I see you again tonight. Congratulations, Dr. Ram! Luv, Andrea

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 8/19/2010 12:59:00 AM

Congratz Dr. Ram Metha on your well deserved 3rd place

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/18/2010 4:09:00 PM

wow,(: a clever poet indeed. don't stare at the sun! & congrats to you. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/18/2010 11:43:00 AM

congrats on your win Dr. Ram

Susan Mills

Date: 8/18/2010 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the clerihew contest! A lovely poem! Love, Susan

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 8/18/2010 8:51:00 AM

Interested in the neighbors? I think it's great...and the write is even better. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/18/2010 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations Dr.Ram on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry". Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 8/17/2010 9:59:00 PM

Heartiest Congrats on your win dear Dr. mehta. Many thanks for your comments and encouragement.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/17/2010 8:57:00 PM

Dr Ram, congratulations on your 3rd place :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2010 6:52:00 PM

Congratulations for you too!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/17/2010 5:51:00 PM

Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in the Giggles Poetry contest .. another brilliant write and super win to enjoy my friend.. with luv.. caio..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/17/2010 5:42:00 PM

Very clever, Doctor. congratulations.

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/17/2010 5:42:00 PM

Well done, Dr. Ram!! She stared the sun down!! How clever!! Congratulations....nice to share 3rd with you! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2010 5:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 8/17/2010 5:03:00 PM

Phenomenal victory with this third place write, Dr Ram. Congratulations! Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2010 3:25:00 PM

Quite witty, Dr. Ram. But you better warn Lily that staring at the sun can cause blindness. Like the way you made it seem that the sun needed to break away from her stare. Best wishes in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2010 12:12:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dr. Ram. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/17/2010 4:50:00 AM

hehe, love the twist Dr. Ram.. enjoyed your unique clerihew, Wilma

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/17/2010 1:38:00 AM

enjoyed this Clerihew, Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2010 9:31:00 PM

wow, that is quite the ending, like a twist! She must be stunning, sunning!! LUv, Andrea

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 8/16/2010 8:49:00 PM

Hahaha! So funny :) I wonder what's next? A Solar Eclipse with this LIly :) Thanks for you nice comment. By the way where is the next International Poetry Meeting?