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I'd crave to wander with you in the rain. At the park, hold hands and sit on a bench. Fresh lovers, older friends, and no more pain. I'd crave to wander with you in the rain. Let's be close to sync our breathing and gain. Dream of a game to play; I hold a wrench. I'd crave to wander with you in the rain. At the park, hold hands and sit on a bench.
Written: February 23, 2023

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Date: 2/25/2023 6:06:00 PM
When lovers wander to a secluded bench, there's truly an opportunity for devoted words exchanged, or "a game to play." Great image, and such a fitting subject for a poem. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 2/24/2023 11:51:00 AM
Very beautiful!!
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Date: 2/24/2023 6:14:00 AM
Strolling with joy is always a great feeling--lovely voice to your poem my friend.
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Date: 2/24/2023 12:48:00 AM
I would not dare walk in the rain, but I loved your triolet. Sharing nature is an elation.
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Date: 2/23/2023 11:16:00 PM
A real 'tear a way' description of complex Feelings within the self; as the Juggernaught of existence rolls And rolls..' Along with this however..' I Am grasping indeed..' the hopeful Possibilitys you explore; in suspension Of thought..Maybe that is all we really Have? Each of us.' As we career along I must cherish the metaphorical.. Rope burns of, imagination and the Interludes i receive.' G'day gotta go, as there are Still the other 500 sheep to shear...' Metaphorically That is.!
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Date: 2/23/2023 7:48:00 PM
this is delicate stroll, always a good idea to share natural beauty with a lover, loved the poem and its grace thanks yann
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Date: 2/23/2023 7:08:00 PM
Showing your romantic side Lasaad, heart wandering, not concerned about the falling rain, hence your craving; fulfilled it seems!...ab
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Date: 2/23/2023 6:19:00 PM
A stroll in the rain with a lover, is a fine way to spend time. Beautiful poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/23/2023 5:54:00 PM
Love the imagery, Lasaad, and yes the rain too, especially when love conquers all. Harry
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Date: 2/23/2023 5:20:00 PM
Beautiful words, such a lovely poem.
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