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A Rainy Day In October

A rainy day toward the end of October When the leaves are breathing their last And the chill makes my arthritis ache, I can’t stop thinking about growing old And being disgruntled by foul weather Letting a little thing like the temperature Have a controlling interest in my mood Even influencing what will be my food! Seasonal depression strikes me immature, Sinks into my brain and tells me whether Or not I am simpering or incredibly bold, Taking ownership for decisions I make -- Like Thanksgiving Day is no time to fast And with family around, I must stay sober. written October 25, 2021

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Gary Radice

Date: 10/26/2021 4:00:00 AM

Hi Milt. I sense a sapping of energy and a lowering of mood from your very descriptive work. I'm not sure if this is about you or a fictional person but seasonal affective disorder is quite common. Poor sleep patterns and poor appetite are some things to seek help for. The seasons are a very powerful force aren't they? I may change in time but I like walking in the cold and rain so I'm not sure what that says about me :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/26/2021 9:13:00 AM

Hey Gary, I sleep well and have a decent appetite. Amazing how the seasons affect us. Strangely this time of year, I have more difficulty composing poetry and, generally, being motivated to do anything productive. I'm amazed that anyone could enjoy walking int he cold and rain, but to each his own, I guess. I really appreciate your thoughtful and kind words.