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A Rainbow Tale

I wrote a poem recently about seeing my first rainbows end It appeared right in front of me A sight so magnificent and quite unbelievable It was hard to comprehend I have seen many a rainbow in my sixty years In so many different lands Yet never have l seen the end of a rainbow So special and in complete awe ….it brought me to tears I am a spiritual being and l do believe in signs I did wonder if there was a reason This magical vision appeared Or was it just right place ,right time A week or so later driving along a country lane Unbelievably another rainbows end appeared Its beauty and colours like the other It was exactly the same Before l continue l know this sounds hard to believe But each time my husband was there with me He also had never seen a rainbows end So we both were surprised at what we had perceived I kid you not…. a few weeks later It happened again This time it was very different ….in fact miraculous As in front us appeared two rainbows ends After a shower of gentle rain Do you think these rainbow ends are sign of some sort Or mother nature and coincidence Please tell if you want to share As l truly would value your thoughts

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Date: 12/5/2023 9:55:00 AM
Love this one, DeB: Rainbows are an everyday happening in Hawaii reminding of how beautiful this world can be. It brought to mind one of my favorite versions of ‘Over the Rainbow,’ by IZ — https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fahr069-fzE
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/9/2023 12:22:00 PM
Hi DEb: I haven’t visited since 2016 when we moved away. Glad you enjoyed the rainbow song. SuZ
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Deb M
Date: 12/9/2023 6:04:00 AM
Oh thats lovely Suz! When was the last you visited Oz? Lovely to see you again…..Debx
Date: 11/24/2023 3:56:00 PM
Deb, sounds like you and your hubby were "Somewhere Under The Rainbow" (lol) I believe in signs...and this was a sign of some very nicely written poetry! Charliex
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Date: 11/25/2023 6:17:00 AM
Hey Charlie long time no see….hope alls well with you….Thankyou for your much appreciated comment! Debx
Date: 11/21/2023 4:02:00 AM
WoW! I have long believed that a rainbow is a sign from God. Because rainbows are so special to me whenever I have a real problem that I take to God in prayer He sends me rainbows in my dreams to let me know the end of my troubles are near and everything will be alright. That's they way it always turns out too. Remember the story of Noah. I believe the fact that you and your husband were so blessed to see the end of or the beginning of not one but three rainbows is a true blessing. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/21/2023 2:08:00 AM
I love rainbows and its always so mesmerizing and i get excited when i see one. I have seen many too but theres this one time i saw a triple rainbow which made me go wow now thats special. I love your poems always dear debx you are truly a fantastic poet that writes seamlessly in such resonating ways. God is truly an artist. Thats what i think, and rainbows show us that theres always hope at the end of The tunnel. Sending you light always. Pleasure reading this
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Date: 11/20/2023 12:44:00 PM
I enjoyed your "Rainbows End" write. This past Saturday sitting at a red light, I saw a pretty rainbow. Over the years I have seen 2 at 1 time also end to end. The rainbow is a sign from God. Watch the sky...  Have a great day.......
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Date: 11/20/2023 12:47:00 PM
Interesting Paula…l am not a religious person but maybe thats my calling! They were so divine….Thankyou Paula always a pleasure….Debx
Date: 11/20/2023 5:30:00 AM
It is the nature blessing you with beauty. Why question something that pleases you, coincidence or not, enjoy the gift of being my friend. Yes a sign, yes a coincidence--depending on how you receive your gift.
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Date: 11/20/2023 6:18:00 AM
Hi Vijay….l felt honoured to see such beauty and valued those precious moments and will hold those memories in my heart always. I am just curious if there are any old wives tale ,any known spiritual sign with it or just others thoughts….being curious does not take away the wonderment of those special moments! Thankyou my friend! Debx
Date: 11/20/2023 4:46:00 AM
Hi Deb, I'm clearly not a rainbow specialist and this is late weighing in on your poem here.. In the Bible it means God's grace and promise not to destroy the earth. In spiritually it means new beginnings. Either way, sounds very promising.
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Date: 11/20/2023 6:23:00 AM
That made me smile Nancy…..you not being a rainbow specialist!! Oh that sounds so lovely….new beginnings! Thankyou for your input Nancy….Debx
Date: 11/20/2023 4:19:00 AM
I have always heard that there was a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow so maybe riches are in your future. Rainbows are beautiful to see and to see the end of one must be awesome. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Deb M
Date: 11/20/2023 6:21:00 AM
Ha no pot of gold alas Sara! Thankyou…lDebx
Date: 11/19/2023 8:21:00 PM
I don't know; I'm not much for speculation. Just wondering if you noticed that little leprechaun making off with the pot of gold... Seriously, this is fascinating. Unreal. Surreal. Beyond real... ~ Ditch the colors; show me the money
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Deb M
Date: 11/20/2023 6:20:00 AM
You're cheeky BB…no money, no leprechauns….just absolute loveliness in front of our eyes!! Debx

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