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A Raging Inferno

Love doesn't need to knock you down Sometimes it's ever so subtle Before you know it you're under it's spell Helplessly trapped in love's bubble No use trying to escape the entrapment It's futile you're under it's spell After long and heightened anticipation Your pulse is racing like hell The absolute extreme best kind of love One that's totally uncontrived The kind that happens when least expected That takes you completely by surprise Excitement almost more than you can bear You think you're going insane Can't sleep, can't do normal everyday things Your world has been set aflame Love often starts so innocently at first And grows into a love tornado Passionate love that builds and builds Until it's a raging inferno!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/12/2021 8:12:00 AM
Fine writing, Jack. Sounds you it comes from your experience, which makes for the best poetry ever.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/12/2021 9:27:00 AM
A fine tribute my friend! Much appreciated Milton!
Date: 4/12/2021 7:05:00 AM
Ya put a song in my head “it’s like thunder it’s like lightning the way you love me is frightening...” ;),
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Date: 4/12/2021 7:33:00 AM
Beautiful........... don't recognize the song though! Great lyrics though, like mine! LOL XOX
Date: 4/12/2021 6:50:00 AM
Your right there Jack, it can bring a strong man to his knees.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/12/2021 7:35:00 AM
Well phrased Sir Thomas! Stunning... cheers!

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