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A Quiet Place

A quiet place beneath garden's old oak. I sit and listen to bird's peaceful call. Behind are tall bushes, magical stroke-- a secret hide-away to watch nightfall. Quail had young in tall, flowering bushes. Birds of all sizes have made feather beds. Singing lullabies mid soft breeze rushes soon, wee wings will fly above clouds ahead. In the cooling dark, I watch comets fly. Stars cluster together, then fall apart. Moon glistens and I hear Summer sigh. A part of the night I loved from the start. Distant lightning flashes across the night. Breeze whispers adieu, she's wanted afar. My soul peaceful communing with quiet. Such magic, I can almost touch a star. July 16, 2022 Rhyme "A Quiet Place" judged 7/20/2022 "Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 12/10/2022 5:59:00 PM
Ann, very nice poem. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- x'd poem - Second Chance, well done, blessings
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Date: 12/6/2022 8:21:00 PM
Dear Ann, you capture the beauty of nightfall with serene imagery, and through your artistry, I am magically transported to this quiet place to share in the splendor of it all. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/30/2022 9:07:00 PM
I like quiet places too, especially enjoyed the 3rd stanza, made me feel like I was there in the dark with the comets and stars~
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Date: 7/23/2022 3:18:00 AM
Ann thank you for your kind comment and visit and so sorry you had all those NASTY falls.night I Also love watching the busy sky and what goes on during the night, it gets as busy as the day . You write this poem with passion - i can feel it. Hugs and blessings, Jenni
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/29/2022 10:39:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jenni!
Date: 7/19/2022 5:06:00 AM
Each stanza paints a lovely portrait, Ann. Much peace a tranquility exude through your splendid words. Best to you.
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/19/2022 4:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for commenting, Vijay. Your wise comments always appreciated.
Date: 7/18/2022 12:59:00 PM
Anne, What a lovely place for all of us! So magical and peaceful. Thx.......suzanne
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/20/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thanks, Suzanne. You and I have lots of bird And blossom talks, don't we :)
Date: 7/18/2022 12:17:00 PM
this is amazing - love it
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/19/2022 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Jack. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 7/17/2022 12:27:00 PM
this one is sure to win. i love it.
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/19/2022 4:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. I think summer evenings are my favorite.:)
Date: 7/16/2022 7:11:00 PM
You are certain to see one falling for you! Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 7/17/2022 8:16:00 AM
That's so sweet, Rico. Aloha

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