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A Quiet Place

Deep in the forest Where silence blends The whisper of leaves, dancing With the wind’s gentle breath… There among the laurels, the pines Mossy logs and boulders Where the creek splashes and burbles Gushing with enthusiasm… Where the melody of wrens Shakes hands with robin and swallow, Promising the hearer who listens Quiet, absorbed in the woods Admiring butterflies who soar by… Where there is only the joy, the peace The hope and the sense of belief Inspiring the moment, the heart’s beating Echoing the joy that comes to praise With a song that abides in the sunlight’s gaze Where stardust caresses an iridescent moon Glowing with favor, graceful and pure Welcoming the prayerful sincerity Enduring the darkness with its doubtful hue Reflecting the love that rains through the clouds… In this quiet place, where I always find… Blessings beyond what my heart can define Beauty more powerful than I could possibly design Bountiful wisdom that comes from the sounds Breaking through the silence with peace so loud... It sounds almost like God’s voice booming down, The wonder of this place… It is so alive, just like our faith! A Quiet Place Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose July 16,2022
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Rose  Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 3:35 PM
You sure know how to mesmerize me, congrats on y our 2nd place win, thanks for joining Gina
Dutta Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 11:58 PM
GREAT. Big congrats to win on your well deserved poem. Blessings
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 9:33 PM
This is a divine free verse Gina. Congratulations on your wonderful second placement. Blessings xxoo
Poteet Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 8:49 PM
A beautiful summary your last stanza of many gorgeous details of your quiet place. Congrats on your win. I love the peace that breaks through the silence.
George Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:38 PM
Back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on your great win, Gina !
Logan Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Very tranquil composition, Gina. Congrats on its standing.
Calasibetta Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Certainly a peaceful place, filled with the miracles of life, that God has provided us with. :)Paulette
Goldsmith Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Lovely" write/story/picture. Love your ending. Yes, God’s voice. Have a great/blessed day.......................
George Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 4:25 AM
This is indeed a lovely poem ! The ambience you have created is similar to that of Paradise, so calming and a sweet sensation filters into our being, offering a feel of unmatched beauty, serenity and bliss ! Love it , Gina !
Baker Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 4:17 PM
Your descriptions and imagery creates a beautiful guiet place to be with God and hear his loving voice. We all need a place like this, and need to spend more time there listening. Bless you, Gina, and good luck in the contest my friend. Bill
Ashley Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Dearest Gina, I adore this poem. Your quiet place abounds with lush imagery of beauty, peace and joy. A poetic paradise! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
Callus Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 1:19 AM
You describe your beautiful quiet splace with delightful imagery, Gina. Without meaning to, I found myself intruding in your sanctuary! The end line is so uplifting. ~ Warm regards & Blessings // paul
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