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A Quiet Break, Continued,

The shadows getting closer, I can now see form and shape. It's body all hunched, arm's hanging down, Cloaked in a big black Cape. It's looking up at my window, I try to hide behind the wall. What I can see from my hiding place, It must be around seven feet tall. It's just got through the gateway, But now it's moved out of sight. What does it want, what have I done ? It's in the middle of the night. I want to get out, But where could I go ? I'm stuck way out here, In a place I don't know. It's coming to get me, I keep asking myself why? Please GOD will you help me, I don't want to die. It's looking through my window, Now it's trying at the door. My body won't stop shaking, I can't take this anymore. It's got through to the hallway, Now it's looking straight at me. Is it a corpse or a phantom? I don't know what it could be. Then all of a sudden, A blood curdling scream. I jump from my bed. It was only a dream. Ps cottage to rent,cheap rates. All enquiries to. Phantom lettings.com.lol

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Date: 11/2/2021 11:33:00 AM
LOL Simon. I came back for seconds and was not disappointed. You have a great story-telling talent. Linda
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Simon Hamill
Date: 11/2/2021 6:51:00 PM
Hi linda.i think I rushed the second part.was a bit disappointed with it ..but at least it finished it off.lol.take care.simon.:-):-)
Date: 10/24/2021 3:16:00 PM
Erm, don't think I will be booking anytime soon lol. What will your review be saying on Tripadvisor? lol Emilia : )
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Date: 11/2/2021 6:55:00 PM
Hi Emilia,lol.not very good for a peaceful break.take care.simon.:-):-)

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