A Quiet Break

I rented myself a cottage,
In a quiet and peaceful place.
I needed time to sort my life,
To give myself some space.

On the morning of my departure,
The sun was shining bright.
I didn't know it was about to change,
When I arrived that night.

I settled down for the evening,
Glass of wine,and book in hand to read.
I needed peace and quiet,
If In my quest,I was to succeed.

Around 10 o'clock in the evening,
Tired and surely spent.
Up the stairs I did climb,
And off to bed I went.

A startling noise awoke me,
A tapping rattling sound.
Dazed and confused, suddenly awake,
With noise's all around.

I crept towards the window,
Branches banging on the pane.
The wind had started howling,
I could hear the windswept rain.

I heard the rumbling of thunder,
See the bolts of lightning strike.
Lashing rain upon the window,
In the tempest of the night.

I look towards the woodland,
I see a shadow standing there.
Red eyes reflected by moonlight,
Towards the cottage it did stare.

The cottage lights a beacon,
It must know that some ones here.
My legs like lead,I can not move,
I'm sure it's getting near.
          ____________________
If you want to know what happens,
I'm sorry you will have to wait.
My story will continue,
If the shadow reaches my gate.

21/10/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/22/2021 4:07:00 AM
I do like a supernatural suspense stories. Enjoyed the read Simon. Look forward to the next instalment. Emilia : )
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Date: 10/22/2021 7:15:00 AM
Hi Emilia,is it super or is it natural.lol .going to start next episode tonight. Hope you're keeping well.take care.simon.:-):-)
Date: 10/21/2021 10:22:00 AM
LOL Quite a fun read Simon. I anxiously await with bated breath :)
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Date: 10/21/2021 4:21:00 PM
Hi Linda,not wrote the rest yet.lol.will write it soon .take care.simon :-)
Date: 10/21/2021 8:13:00 AM
you like your supernatural/horror tales, is it for a comp?
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Date: 10/21/2021 4:23:00 PM
Hello Charlotte,I like a bit of excitement.lol.its not for a comp.take care.simon.:-):-)
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