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A Quandary At Morning Break

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As the morning breaks, in a summer day a bare foot boy, in blue denim overalls, red and white striped tee-shirt, and straw hat, rolls up his pantlegs up to his knees, and stands on the narrow river's white quay. Alongside the tall rustling sedge, where the water is cool, busy meadow bees hum, annoy as he holds his long cane pole. A quandary. Anxious, made him quiver, takes a step, Then two, then three, against the rustling sedge. Outraged, he bids, go away you, with sully fire. Stricken by slanderous words from out of his mouth; Suddenly replaced with silence and unease. Penance for your soul to be cleansed. The tears he shed, a boy of quaint poise, Burdened with the weight of such sin. Like perfume oozes through air, Hearing his murmuring pitiful word, Sorry. To him was the worth of not gold, but platinum. 3/1/2021 Mind Your P's And Q's Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner Penance Poise Perfume Platinum Quay Quiver Quandary Quaint

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Date: 3/8/2021 6:23:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on the win Eve! Linda
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Date: 3/7/2021 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write and picture. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 3/6/2021 6:31:00 PM
Subtle pure sentiment of innocence! A beautiful write! Congrats on your win, Eve!
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Date: 3/6/2021 4:43:00 PM
this is absolutely delightful Eve and i love the picture you used, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:51:00 AM
Eve, this is a little like Mark Twain meets Norman Rockwell, a very charming sweet story, congratulations and thanks for entering my contest~
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Date: 3/2/2021 8:04:00 AM
Lovely Eve. Full of great imagery! Best wishes in the contest. :) Linda
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Date: 3/1/2021 5:11:00 PM
Eve, this is just delightful! I love the way you used the words. I can definitely see it on the winners list. Your words go perfectly with the picture. Best wishes for the contest!
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Date: 3/1/2021 4:35:00 AM
Great imagery here!
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Date: 3/1/2021 2:48:00 AM
Neatly done. Those words are very difficult. You did very well.
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