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A Quandary At Morning Break

As the morning breaks, in a summer day
a bare foot boy, in blue denim overalls, 
red and white striped tee-shirt, and straw hat, 
rolls up his pantlegs up to his knees, and stands 
on the narrow river's white  quay. 
Alongside the tall rustling sedge,
where the water is cool, busy meadow bees hum,
annoy as he holds his long cane pole. 
A quandary. Anxious, made him quiver, takes a step,
Then two, then three, against the rustling sedge.
Outraged, he bids, go away you, with sully fire.
Stricken by slanderous words from out of his mouth;
Suddenly replaced with silence and unease.
Penance  for your soul to be cleansed.
The tears he shed, a boy of quaint poise, 
Burdened with the weight of such sin.
Like perfume oozes through air,
Hearing his murmuring pitiful word, Sorry.
To him was the worth of not gold, but platinum. 


3/1/2021

Mind Your P's And Q's Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner

Penance Poise Perfume Platinum
Quay Quiver Quandary Quaint
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Fowler Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Back to say congratulations on the win Eve! Linda
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write and picture. Have a blessed day.............
Seeker Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 6:31 PM
Subtle pure sentiment of innocence! A beautiful write! Congrats on your win, Eve!
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 4:43 PM
this is absolutely delightful Eve and i love the picture you used, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
Faulkner Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Eve, this is a little like Mark Twain meets Norman Rockwell, a very charming sweet story, congratulations and thanks for entering my contest~
Fowler Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Lovely Eve. Full of great imagery! Best wishes in the contest. :) Linda
Kauffman Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 5:11 PM
Eve, this is just delightful! I love the way you used the words. I can definitely see it on the winners list. Your words go perfectly with the picture. Best wishes for the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 4:35 AM
Great imagery here!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 2:48 AM
Neatly done. Those words are very difficult. You did very well.
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