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A Proper Valentine

A picnic for two would be so quaint And cards of sentiment are high on the rank Expensive jewelry that sparkles the eye To most girls is the biggest prize Flowers are lovely Balloons divine Teddy bears cuddly And dinner is fine But if you really want to see me smile There’s only one proper Valentine Make it Dove dark chocolates…everytime!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/26/2018 4:17:00 PM
My wife's favourite chocolate that is, while i just love the poetry.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/26/2018 8:04:00 PM
Thanks Harry, hope this was a sweet read for you :)...I'm sure your wife likes your poetry too, especially if it's about her! Have great day :) C.H.
Date: 2/18/2018 12:45:00 PM
An adorable Valentine poem, Chris! I too would go for dark chocolate (not necessarily Dove!). Hope you had a lovely romantic Valentine's Day:) Regards // paul
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/18/2018 8:26:00 PM
Truth be told, I really don't turn down any brand of dark chocolate, Dove is just my favorite :)... and I had some to make smiley face picture. Have a great day Paul, thanks for the visit :) C.H.
Date: 2/16/2018 8:34:00 AM
For me it is those round nuggets wrapped in gold that for the life of me I cannot remember the name of right now. A very cute poem - I enjoyed the read that ended with my grin and a desire for my fav food group - chocolate! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/17/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for the visit CayCay, glad my words could bring you a smile...sorry I can't deliver gold chocolate nuggets!...I'm surprised I don't bleed chocolate haha :0 Have a lovely day :) C.H.
Date: 2/14/2018 2:10:00 AM
- A sweet poem, Chris :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/14/2018 2:34:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Anne-Lise :) Chocolate, best thing for women ever! Happy Valentines :) C.H.
Date: 2/13/2018 7:59:00 PM
Lovely romantic write..a well written poem, Chris.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/14/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thanks Vijay :) I know it's only chocolate, but I like it, like it, yes I do! Happy Valentines C.H.
Date: 2/13/2018 7:53:00 PM
This Valentines poem is very fun, cute and sweet with the list of all the things you don't want and admitting you only want Dove chocolates ~Hope you get your Dove chocolates tomorrow!~Che :)
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/14/2018 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Che :)...well, I wouldn't scoff at flowers or a fuzzy teddy bear... but they better come with a bag of Doves! haha :0 Happy Valentines C.H.
Date: 2/13/2018 7:38:00 PM
a good choice. I hope you have all your valentine fantasies come true in one spectacular evening.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/14/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thanks Richard...everyone has their guilty pleasures :) Guess I'm a cheap Valentine haha :0 Have a great Valentines Day C.H.
Date: 2/13/2018 7:36:00 PM
You know what you like! My husband used to give me Godiva mints for Christmas but they stopped making those beauties!
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/14/2018 2:07:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Kim :) I'm sorry you no longer have your favorite guilty pleasure... I like dark chocolate mint too...and raspberry, yumm! Happy Valentines Day C.H.
Date: 2/13/2018 6:30:00 PM
Chris, oh this is delightful and sweet !
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/14/2018 2:04:00 PM
Thanks so much for the visit and delightful comments :) Happy Valentines Day C.H.
Date: 2/13/2018 6:24:00 PM
A very light and sweet Valentine poem...I like it...A touch of love to it...All the best Chris
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Chris Hagy
Date: 2/14/2018 1:57:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Arturo, I really liked your comment :) Have a wonderful Valentines Day C.H.
Date: 2/13/2018 6:02:00 PM
oh Chris, this one is so great. I wrote about Dove chocolates too, maybe ten years ago I did a short poem like this one on how I only wanted Dove chocolate (great minds!!)
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Date: 2/14/2018 1:55:00 PM
I almost put a note at the end of this one that this one was for you! haha :0 I remember some comments before with you about Doves...truth be known I'll eat most kinds of dark chocolate, but Dove is definitely the best :) Have great Valentines Day Andrea C.H.
Date: 2/13/2018 5:34:00 PM
Hello Chris,I like the teddy bears and the Dove chocolates two of my favourite things. Have a nice evening my friends.
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Date: 2/13/2018 4:23:00 PM
Haha... chocolates the way to your heart.. Sweet write Chris..
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