Chris Hagy Poet Light Verse

A Proper Valentine

A picnic for two would be so quaint
And cards of sentiment are high on the rank
Expensive jewelry that sparkles the eye
To most girls is the biggest prize

Flowers are lovely
Balloons divine
Teddy bears cuddly
And dinner is fine
But if you really want to see me smile
There’s only one proper Valentine
Make it Dove dark chocolates…everytime!

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Harry Horsman February 26, 2018 at 4:17 PM My wife's favourite chocolate that is, while i just love the poetry. Chris Hagy February 26, 2018 at 8:04 PM Thanks Harry, hope this was a sweet read for you :)...I'm sure your wife likes your poetry too, especially if it's about her! Have great day :) C.H.

Paul Callus February 18, 2018 at 12:45 PM An adorable Valentine poem, Chris! I too would go for dark chocolate (not necessarily Dove!). Hope you had a lovely romantic Valentine's Day:) Regards // paul Chris Hagy February 18, 2018 at 8:26 PM Truth be told, I really don't turn down any brand of dark chocolate, Dove is just my favorite :)... and I had some to make smiley face picture. Have a great day Paul, thanks for the visit :) C.H.

CayCay Godwin February 16, 2018 at 8:34 AM For me it is those round nuggets wrapped in gold that for the life of me I cannot remember the name of right now. A very cute poem - I enjoyed the read that ended with my grin and a desire for my fav food group - chocolate! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Chris Hagy February 17, 2018 at 10:13 AM Thanks for the visit CayCay, glad my words could bring you a smile...sorry I can't deliver gold chocolate nuggets!...I'm surprised I don't bleed chocolate haha :0 Have a lovely day :) C.H.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 2:10 AM - A sweet poem, Chris :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Hagy February 14, 2018 at 2:34 PM Thanks for the visit Anne-Lise :) Chocolate, best thing for women ever! Happy Valentines :) C.H.

Vijay Pandit February 13, 2018 at 7:59 PM Lovely romantic write..a well written poem, Chris. Chris Hagy February 14, 2018 at 2:32 PM Thanks Vijay :) I know it's only chocolate, but I like it, like it, yes I do! Happy Valentines C.H.

Cheryl Hoffman February 13, 2018 at 7:53 PM This Valentines poem is very fun, cute and sweet with the list of all the things you don't want and admitting you only want Dove chocolates ~Hope you get your Dove chocolates tomorrow!~Che :) Chris Hagy February 14, 2018 at 2:25 PM Thanks Che :)...well, I wouldn't scoff at flowers or a fuzzy teddy bear... but they better come with a bag of Doves! haha :0 Happy Valentines C.H.

Richard Lamoureux February 13, 2018 at 7:38 PM a good choice. I hope you have all your valentine fantasies come true in one spectacular evening. Chris Hagy February 14, 2018 at 2:22 PM Thanks Richard...everyone has their guilty pleasures :) Guess I'm a cheap Valentine haha :0 Have a great Valentines Day C.H.

Kim Rodrigues February 13, 2018 at 7:36 PM You know what you like! My husband used to give me Godiva mints for Christmas but they stopped making those beauties! Chris Hagy February 14, 2018 at 2:07 PM Thanks for the visit Kim :) I'm sorry you no longer have your favorite guilty pleasure... I like dark chocolate mint too...and raspberry, yumm! Happy Valentines Day C.H.

Constance La France February 13, 2018 at 6:30 PM Chris, oh this is delightful and sweet ! Chris Hagy February 14, 2018 at 2:04 PM Thanks so much for the visit and delightful comments :) Happy Valentines Day C.H.

Arturo Michael February 13, 2018 at 6:24 PM A very light and sweet Valentine poem...I like it...A touch of love to it...All the best Chris Chris Hagy February 14, 2018 at 1:57 PM Thanks for the visit Arturo, I really liked your comment :) Have a wonderful Valentines Day C.H.

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2018 at 6:02 PM oh Chris, this one is so great. I wrote about Dove chocolates too, maybe ten years ago I did a short poem like this one on how I only wanted Dove chocolate (great minds!!) Chris Hagy February 14, 2018 at 1:55 PM I almost put a note at the end of this one that this one was for you! haha :0 I remember some comments before with you about Doves...truth be known I'll eat most kinds of dark chocolate, but Dove is definitely the best :) Have great Valentines Day Andrea C.H.

Darlene De Beaulieu February 13, 2018 at 5:34 PM Hello Chris,I like the teddy bears and the Dove chocolates two of my favourite things. Have a nice evening my friends.

Silent One February 13, 2018 at 4:23 PM Haha... chocolates the way to your heart.. Sweet write Chris..