A Prisoner Is Shown the Torture Implements

The bricks were sweating, nervous.  Icy slime
   had soaked his coat-sleeve, much to his disgust.
Tall baulks of formless timber seemed to climb
   towards the bulbous shadows.  Guido, trussed
and pinioned, tried to scratch the saline rime
   that nagged his upper lip (for scratch he must),
using his shoulder.  Someone’s hand-held lamp
was scouring crazy patterns on the damp.

As Fisc officials fidgeted and fussed,
   Count Guido, motionless, gouged free of Time,
stared at the torture implements.  Nonplussed,
   unravelled, unaware of glare or grime,  
he saw steel jaws, unsoftened by stale dust.
   The hanging chains, when brushed, gave up a chime
as sinister as that serrated clamp
which dominated all the waiting ramp.

The irony was utterly sublime.
   They’ll “put him to the question”, as discussed.
As fitted the prevailing paradigm,
   They’d tear his vitals, gouge him, drill him, thrust
their white-hot spikes quite through him, till his crime
   was suitably admitted, as was “just”.
Some may withstand the pincers’ chew and champ,
but Guido knew he wasn’t of that stamp.

His eyes had hardly started to adjust.
   Prolonging this perverted pantomime
would only satisfy the sadists’ lust.
   If necessary, he’d recant in rhyme.
His knuckles scraped the carapace of rust
   of some utensil, which this fetid clime
so soon engendered.  Turning to decamp,
he felt no pain beyond necrotic cramp.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 22, 2017 at 5:53 AM
AHA! I was looking for this poem, found it ;)
Coy Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Yes, it's a quick attempt to start composing poetry ... I get impatient with research!
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March 3, 2017 at 8:54 AM
What Kim said... But I so much would like to know the story behind it? Oh and yeah Ottavo rimo. Still have to do that one. Your rhyme is wonderful as always....
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March 3, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Oh, I LOVE that, thank you :)
Coy Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Darren. I'm writing a poetic novel - can't think what else to call it - based on a true story. In Rome in 1697, a man murders his 17-year-old wife. We hear the story of their relationship from various witnesses ... where does the truth lie?
Rodrigues Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 6:26 AM
Excellent, Michael! You have created a frightening image of the suffering this fellow would endure and his self-examination. The need to recant but in his own way - in rhyme.
Coy Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 6:47 AM
Kim, I'm thrilled by your reaction. Thank you very much!
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