A Prism of Color-Cq

quivering wings
on windless day
in flowers sway
hummingbird moth

drops of nectar
glisten in sun
rainbow colors
unfold the dawn




August 31, 2019
Charlie-Quadku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 9/20/2019 5:55:00 PM
wow, there you go again, wowing me. Congrats on a well deserved win. For me, one of the very best.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 6:18:00 PM
thank you so much my friend :) hugs
Date: 9/18/2019 11:32:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win, excellent **
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/18/2019 12:39:00 PM
Thank you very much....heading over to view the winners now... hugs :)
Date: 9/18/2019 11:11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely Haiku, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/18/2019 12:39:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend...i have to go check the list out...playing catch up now :) hugs
Date: 9/18/2019 8:12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful imagery. Congrats on your top win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/18/2019 11:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeanne, just got home, haven't seen the winner's list yet :) hugs
Date: 9/18/2019 6:21:00 AM
Beautiful Sandra. Great imagery with a nice flow to this colorful write :) Congratulations on your win.. Hugs Charlie
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/18/2019 11:06:00 AM
Thank you for hosting this cool contest and the honor of a win my friend :) hugs
Date: 9/2/2019 8:17:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, there always seems to be a splash of nature in your work that makes it all the more enchanting. This is how every day should be. Thank you for this amazing picture you have created in my mind.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Chris for your kind comments, nature’s beauty is all around, like you I have learned to enjoy it every chance I can :) hugs
Date: 9/1/2019 1:50:00 PM
Good Move. Me also focused on rainbow.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/1/2019 2:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Anisha :)
Date: 9/1/2019 7:37:00 AM
gorgeous imagery Sandra, I'd love to see a hummingbird for real! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/1/2019 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Jan...i am blessed to watch them all day long, until the weather turns cooler than i won't see them again until next year...hugs
Date: 8/31/2019 6:30:00 PM
This is a pretty one. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/31/2019 6:43:00 PM
Thank you Rick, i remember my first encounter with a hummingbird moth, i thought it was a hummingbird until i saw the antennae then i was afraid of it...lol, i am used to them now though, they are almost as pretty as the hummingbirds, though i prefer the birds over moths! :) hugs
Date: 8/31/2019 5:11:00 PM
Rainbow colors definitely, picture perfect ending, wonderful contender for the contest!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/31/2019 6:06:00 PM
Thank you...I am hoping i did the form correctly, the example showed two so i did two :) hugs
Date: 8/31/2019 12:36:00 PM
So lovely, So well written, Sandra. (are you Sandy sometimes, sometimes, Sandra?)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/31/2019 4:00:00 PM
thank you for asking :) hugs, enjoy your weekend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/31/2019 2:32:00 PM
Thanks--Sandy it is!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/31/2019 12:48:00 PM
I changed it to sandy but it confused people so I put it back to Sandra. My birth name is Sandra but I prefer Sandy... thank you :) hugs
Date: 8/31/2019 8:32:00 AM
Choice words set in motion its flow -- NICE, ~ Aloha William
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/31/2019 9:05:00 AM
Thank you my friend, I am not sure If I penned it right for the contest but inspiration came quick :) hugs
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