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A Positive Poem

Drowning deep in love, lost factual self, His indifference beside, Really worth my life ? Precious to family, as stars to sky, Adored dear as moon to night, Inner self I must fight ! Two Kimos - 10/7/6 Written on 21/6/14 Contest- A positive poem Sponsor - Elly Wouterse Now for contest 'Any poem under 15 lines #1 contest by PD A Awarded 1st place win

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2014 4:27:00 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/28/2014 8:19:00 PM

Grats on first place, :) awesome :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/28/2014 7:06:00 PM

Beautiful Kimo, Upma; when one considers all the negative things that effect us in life, it is so good to see you reacting with such positivity. Congratulations on a very merited top podium win. // paul

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/28/2014 2:11:00 PM

Congrats on a great win with this poem of such deep thought, Dr Sharma.. Hugs.. Arlene

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 1:06:00 PM

Good to see this one on the winner list and I am happy to finally see it for first time. CONGRATS

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/28/2014 1:19:00 PM

Thanks Andrea for the visit n the wishes !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/28/2014 10:16:00 AM

Wonderful poem, congrats on the win, Dr. Upma

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/28/2014 10:47:00 AM

Thnx Dr Ram !

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/28/2014 10:01:00 AM

Big congrats on your win!!! "Inner self I must fight !" A fight you will win. For the soul (your soul) has arrived ahead of the body my friend!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/28/2014 10:47:00 AM

Thanks for thoughtful comments Robert ! Honoured !

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/28/2014 5:05:00 AM

Upma, congrats for being positive and winning. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/28/2014 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Mohan !

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/21/2014 3:33:00 PM

Dear Dr. Upma, Sometimes we do lose site of ourselves when we "drown" in deep emotions. In matters like this, I tend to let my conscience guide me. A very nicely penned entry for Elly's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/23/2014 5:50:00 AM

Thanks dear Carolyn for your evershinig comments,, truly i m trying to be positive ,, although my conscience too is refusing to guide // Upma //