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A positive poem


              Drowning deep in love, lost factual self,
                     His indifference beside,
                       Really worth my life ?

               Precious to family, as stars to sky,
                  Adored dear as moon to night,
                     Inner self I must fight !




Two Kimos - 10/7/6
Written on 21/6/14
Contest- A positive poem
Sponsor - Elly Wouterse

Now for contest 'Any poem under 15 lines #1 contest by PD A

Awarded 1st place win

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Date: 6/30/2014 4:27:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
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Date: 6/28/2014 8:19:00 PM
Grats on first place, :) awesome :)
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Date: 6/28/2014 7:06:00 PM
Beautiful Kimo, Upma; when one considers all the negative things that effect us in life, it is so good to see you reacting with such positivity. Congratulations on a very merited top podium win. // paul
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Date: 6/28/2014 2:11:00 PM
Congrats on a great win with this poem of such deep thought, Dr Sharma.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/28/2014 1:06:00 PM
Good to see this one on the winner list and I am happy to finally see it for first time. CONGRATS
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/28/2014 1:19:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for the visit n the wishes !
Date: 6/28/2014 10:16:00 AM
Wonderful poem, congrats on the win, Dr. Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/28/2014 10:47:00 AM
Thnx Dr Ram !
Date: 6/28/2014 10:01:00 AM
Big congrats on your win!!! "Inner self I must fight !" A fight you will win. For the soul (your soul) has arrived ahead of the body my friend!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/28/2014 10:47:00 AM
Thanks for thoughtful comments Robert ! Honoured !
Date: 6/28/2014 5:05:00 AM
Upma, congrats for being positive and winning. Mohan
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/28/2014 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Mohan !
Date: 6/28/2014 4:11:00 AM
Positivism from within.. The best there is. I am simply returning all you gave in this poem. I really can't give more than this 1st prize. Congrats on being placed first. Dutch Greetings. Elly
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/28/2014 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Elly ! So Glad that u liked this one ,, it's beyond any words to express my joy wish this win !
Date: 6/21/2014 3:33:00 PM
Dear Dr. Upma, Sometimes we do lose site of ourselves when we "drown" in deep emotions. In matters like this, I tend to let my conscience guide me. A very nicely penned entry for Elly's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/23/2014 5:50:00 AM
Thanks dear Carolyn for your evershinig comments,, truly i m trying to be positive ,, although my conscience too is refusing to guide // Upma //