A Positive Poem

Orange moonlight gleams in the sky warm as duskfall’s evanescence like an orb trimmed with copper dye orange moonlight gleams in the sky; I gaze with an enchanted pry as dragonflies rush to fluoresce, orange moonlight gleams in the sky warm as duskfall’s evanescence. Till rounder and higher she glows each frame a swaying groove and veil, on crescent tip’s lucent repose till rounder and higher she glows; across a line of gilded rows captivating my breath, inhale! Till rounder and higher she glows, each beam a swaying groove and veil. A Positive Poem for Elly Waterouse 6/20/2014
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Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 4:38 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
Nance Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Wonderful Nette you have a way of painting a perfect picture, great job :)
Smith Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 1:14 PM
beautiful! Nette.. I gaze with an enchanted pry.. awesome! congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 9:55 AM
A wonderful poem, congrats on the win, nette
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Congrats my friend on your win!
A. Sharma Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Very lovely fabulous write Nette ! Congrats on top win !
Chutani Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 4:21 AM
Nette, congrats for such a fine win. Mohan
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 4:15 PM
great imagery.. :) wow!!! , God bless you Nette.
Thomas Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 5:17 AM
beautiful poem... :)
Enriquez Avatar
June 22, 2014 at 5:22 PM
Dear Nette: Lovely truly. Even the moon will agree. Where do your words come from? All the best then. Leon
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 12:04 PM
- Beautifully reading, Nette :) - A picture to admire !!! - Happy weekend!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 11:22 PM
triolets are meant for gorgeous repeating lines such as these, Nette. Very nice. Did the acrostic contest inspire you to keep going on with moon poems? Thanks for the win in your last contest.
Chutani Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 11:08 PM
nette, this is very impressive- duskfall's evanescence is so well described in Indian folklore also. Mohan
Lalion Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 7:17 PM
Nette,I have to give it to you, you breathe freshness into the classical theme of poetry with cool contemporary twist. Did you notice how the senses were used to bring this art home? ( gaze,sway, orange, groove, captivate).Uplifting me; I'm moonstruck!
Datu Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 4:08 PM
I was utterly absorbed in your words, and a deep resonance occurred.Your connection with the moon is mysteriously enchanting; I almost forgot to exhale!
Kendrick Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Uniquely yours, creative and descriptive..Enjoyed reading your triolet..Thanks for the visit by my page..Sara
Carroll Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 3:36 PM
Great write Nette filled with rich imagery!
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