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A Positive Poem

Orange moonlight gleams in the sky warm as duskfall’s evanescence like an orb trimmed with copper dye orange moonlight gleams in the sky; I gaze with an enchanted pry as dragonflies rush to fluoresce, orange moonlight gleams in the sky warm as duskfall’s evanescence. Till rounder and higher she glows each frame a swaying groove and veil, on crescent tip’s lucent repose till rounder and higher she glows; across a line of gilded rows captivating my breath, inhale! Till rounder and higher she glows, each beam a swaying groove and veil. A Positive Poem for Elly Waterouse 6/20/2014

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Date: 6/30/2014 4:38:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it of exceptional quality. Sara
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Date: 6/28/2014 7:20:00 PM
Wonderful Nette you have a way of painting a perfect picture, great job :)
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Date: 6/28/2014 1:14:00 PM
beautiful! Nette.. I gaze with an enchanted pry.. awesome! congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/28/2014 9:55:00 AM
A wonderful poem, congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 6/28/2014 9:52:00 AM
Congrats my friend on your win!
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Date: 6/28/2014 7:53:00 AM
Very lovely fabulous write Nette ! Congrats on top win !
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Date: 6/28/2014 4:21:00 AM
Nette, congrats for such a fine win. Mohan
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Date: 6/26/2014 4:15:00 PM
great imagery.. :) wow!!! , God bless you Nette.
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Date: 6/23/2014 5:17:00 AM
beautiful poem... :)
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Date: 6/22/2014 5:22:00 PM
Dear Nette: Lovely truly. Even the moon will agree. Where do your words come from? All the best then. Leon
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Date: 6/21/2014 12:04:00 PM
- Beautifully reading, Nette :) - A picture to admire !!! - Happy weekend!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/20/2014 11:22:00 PM
triolets are meant for gorgeous repeating lines such as these, Nette. Very nice. Did the acrostic contest inspire you to keep going on with moon poems? Thanks for the win in your last contest.
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Date: 6/20/2014 11:08:00 PM
nette, this is very impressive- duskfall's evanescence is so well described in Indian folklore also. Mohan
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Date: 6/20/2014 7:17:00 PM
Nette,I have to give it to you, you breathe freshness into the classical theme of poetry with cool contemporary twist. Did you notice how the senses were used to bring this art home? ( gaze,sway, orange, groove, captivate).Uplifting me; I'm moonstruck!
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Date: 6/20/2014 4:08:00 PM
I was utterly absorbed in your words, and a deep resonance occurred.Your connection with the moon is mysteriously enchanting; I almost forgot to exhale!
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Date: 6/20/2014 4:07:00 PM
Uniquely yours, creative and descriptive..Enjoyed reading your triolet..Thanks for the visit by my page..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2014 3:36:00 PM
Great write Nette filled with rich imagery!
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