Emile Pinet Poet Sonnet

A Porcelain Doll

At the break of Dawn, she poses in place,
as a rising sun stains the night sky pink.
And my artistic hand begins to race;
sketching her features with charcoal and ink.

Ebony, outlines, mesmerizing eyes,
as if she stepped from a fantasy dream.
And as cotton-candy clouds tint the skies,
gilded shafts of light make her aura gleam.

With her white face as featureless as smoke:
colored silks adorn this porcelain doll.
And as my muse guides my every brush stroke:
I'm inspired to try and capture it all.

A Japanese Geisha touts perfection;
nothing about her, invites correction.

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Line Gauthier May 13, 2018 at 10:49 AM A most entertaining read, Emile.

Gregory Richard Barden November 11, 2017 at 10:39 PM Wonderfully romantic and thoughtful write, Emile - congratulations on the win! I adore all things Japanese, especially historical cultuire, and I enjoyed this very much! :-) Emile Pinet November 12, 2017 at 9:11 AM Thanks so much Gregory, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Elaine George November 7, 2017 at 12:48 PM As beautiful as the picture, Emile. Congratulations on your top-notch win. Elaine Emile Pinet November 7, 2017 at 5:06 PM Thanks so much Elaine, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper November 6, 2017 at 7:43 PM Emile, beautiful imagery , congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`* Emile Pinet November 7, 2017 at 8:55 AM Thanks Eve, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton November 6, 2017 at 6:29 PM Amazing sonnet Emile, knew this was a winner congrats! Emile Pinet November 7, 2017 at 8:52 AM Thank you again John, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison November 6, 2017 at 4:05 PM So beautiful and romantic Emile and I love the accompanying picture too:-) hugs jan xx Emile Pinet November 7, 2017 at 8:56 AM Thanks Jan, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Judith S November 6, 2017 at 11:14 AM Congratulations on your win Emile!! Wonderful use of words in this beautifully written sonnet. Best, Judy Emile Pinet November 7, 2017 at 8:56 AM Thanks Judy, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Dale Gregory Cozart November 6, 2017 at 9:16 AM Congratulations on your 7th Place win! Thank you so much for taking the time to enter. Emile Pinet November 7, 2017 at 8:51 AM Thanks Dale, I enjoyed your contest, your comments are always most welcome my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton October 29, 2017 at 3:14 PM Excellent Sonnet Emile, great use of the required words, didn't feel forced at all, this should do well in the contest! Emile Pinet October 29, 2017 at 5:15 PM Thank you John, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Heidi Sands October 29, 2017 at 2:44 PM Very well done Emile. Good luck in the contest :) Emile Pinet October 29, 2017 at 5:14 PM Thank you so much Heidi, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2017 at 2:15 PM - Oh, beautiful and romantic Emile :) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Emile Pinet October 29, 2017 at 5:14 PM Thanks Annie-Lise, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Silent One October 29, 2017 at 2:08 PM A brilliant romantic sonnet.. Emile Pinet October 29, 2017 at 5:13 PM Thank you Silent One, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.