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A Pond's Melody

A Pond's Melody Contest Sponsor - Nette Onclaud 06/08 /2025 [] Blue-green symphony My worries all wash away Downpour on a summer day Dewdrops and the rain Dance O' pond of melodies Sing a song of Jubilee
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Date: 6/11/2025 7:55:00 AM
Impossible to include all the players in the melody with such a limited line count. I like that you stayed general with the connection to observer. Congrats.
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Date: 6/11/2025 7:17:00 AM
Very pretty! Love the wording! Congrats!
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Date: 6/9/2025 5:43:00 AM
Dear Rick, your poem excels with vivid emotion and imagery. Every line sparkles with beauty and poetic finesse. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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